I had to put on Sting's "Someone To Watch Over Me" while I read this. :) This scene made me seriously love Will. He's a twerp sometimes, but he's such a sweetie.

It really makes me mad when people say Will is dumb...he so is not. He has different priorities than most people, and you get that point across really well with this piece.

I enjoyed it a great deal and I must say that the original scene in the series disturbed me a bit, because I'm such a Syd/Vaughn shipper. But your take on the scene made perfect sense and really showed it for what is was and supplied great insight into Will's mind in that moment! Really nice work!

Keep going with the Syd/Will thing!

Again (this is the second review I'm posting for one of your stories) I loved it. Maybe I'm just in a good mood where everything is great, but I love your stories. Except that I thought of doing a piece like this and you basically wrote everything I was thinking. :) Maybe I'll beat you to it next time. Keep writing!

Ash

Fabulous job! I like Vaughn well enough but I really like Will. I wish there were more W/S fics. Please write more. There is an audience.

Aww...I am certainly not a Syd/Will shipper, but I loved this and thought it was really sweet. If Will was portrayed like this in every episode, I could sit quietly through Syd's scenes with him instead of screaming "Dangit, go to Vaughn! Vaughn!" lol! _

As a S/V shipper, I can tell you easily that it was a wonderful story - a good reflection of what was going on in Will's mind at the time. The same idea struck me - that the whole romantic thing wasn't as important as the ability to be there for her in that moment.

Excellent job!

Hey, what can I say? I too, loved the scene in Confession... especially since I finally saw all the eps and realised I'm a Will/Syd shipper - even tho from what I can see, that's an unpopular place to be. The story works very well, and it's nice to see some Alias fic that's *not* all Sydney/Vaughn!

SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL! ! I LUV WILL/SYDNEY, AND NOONE WRITES ABOUT THEM! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL SOON! THANX! TATA

*SNIF* Somehow I managed to wander away from the book section and... awww. I like Syd/Will. So sue me.

Ohhhh-this was so great. Fanfiction seems to neglect Will and, even more so, Sydney/Will. I don't think it's quite accurate to say you've captured Will's voice, but the way you wrote it is very definitely *him*. This was well-crafted and I enjoyed it very much. :)

Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing a Will/Sydney-centric piece! I love their relationship, and my heart just melted during this scene in "Confession." You did a wonderful job, and I hope you write more.

Brilliant. Loved every angsty moment of it...really good POV piece. I'm seriously impressed. :)