Yeah this was another one of those stories I copied and pasted cause I couldn't stop reading it and there is no internet at school but I finished school so For the win lol. I really liked the excellent portrayal of Cyclonis how she jumps at affection its just so realistic to how she would react ) awesome story yay Darklonis

lol i can get cyclonis feeling slightly uncomfortable here, id be the same if a boy was coming on too fast for me. :)

heya kitty, i read this story of yours ages ago before i had my acount and i only just found it and re read it because i forgot what hapened, sorry, :3 but this story is brilliant well done :)

good job hay I learnt a magic trick lol :)

dude i totallyjust joined and i love dark ace and cyclonis as a couple dispite the fact that the have an age difference, so i was wondering with your permission if i could continue this story off of yours. (PLEASE REPLY ASAP)

I loved the idea, very imaginative. Thanks for sharing.

Hm, the Charakteres are a little OOC, but the story fits the behavior of the charakters like you put them very well. And as i already said, i really like the way you're writing.

thank you for uploading

Mailo :)

XD I wanted to review after i read all the chapters that are already on, but in this chapter dark ace is just so cute, that i had to write it to you! XD

Well if I'm already here I can also write, that I really like the way you're writing.

XD good story hope you can write a sequel and if not oh well i'm just glad you wrote this one

great story loved it, :)

yay happy endings i love them :D

yay they reached perfect attumenment :)

SEQUEL? SEQUEL? please, this was really good..

well, that wnded diferently then i thought it would.

Can't wait for the next story!

Cowgirls Angel Rita

aka: Rita

I am going to put this story in my favorites list, so there! All I have to say is AWESOME STORY!