Love it :)

This was just lovely, as another reviewer said: satisfying. Well done and I should get a cookie for knowing my Veronica Mars. I enjoy adult Rose and Scorpius fics so much more than the teenage variety. My only tiny tiny quibble is that it wouldn't be called St Louise's Scared Heart unless two hospitals had merged or something as St Louise can't have a Sacred Heart but I feel awful even mentioning it after reading such a convincing and winning story.

Beautiful. Really beautiful. beautiful story line and beautifully written.

Dakota

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i think it was really nice

Love it :)

This was awesome. I wanted to scream at them sometimes for being so obtuse. Honestly, It was one of the best one-shots I ever read. Did you ever consider writing a sequel to it?

just a quick note to let you know that I really enjoyed this. It was really original. thanks for sharing!

Aw...that's very cute and believable. Does not need to be M though...

Oi!

Adorei essa fic! Mt mt boa mesmo! Fuçando seu profile a procura de mais algumas pra ler vi que vc é brasileira!

Parabens pela fic, está ótima!

You are brilliant, Sophia! I saved this to read on the weekend, and was nicely rewarded! It was really fun to read, and full of surprises for me!

Favorite fact: Rose snorts a little when she has a good laugh!

I know you have 50 other things you want to write, but if you are ever so inclined, I would enjoy reading more about this pair. Either their past or their future. :-)

So I may not be getting any cookies, but being able to read this fantastic one-shot is reward enough! D I absolutely love it!

AMAZING!

really nice how you managed it so they didn't even kiss till the end.

For future stories, it is a lot easier to read if the story is broken up into smaller chapters.

That aside, i really liked the story! no grammatical errors or anything i can think of.

Keep writing!

wow, i really like this!

well done indeed!

first, i am a shameless rose/scorpius shipper.

second, d'you have any idea how good it is to find an intelligent-different-well written-romantic but not corny-surprisingly well developed-realistic and endearing story about a subject you like a lot? in case you're wondering the answer is good!

thank you so much.

ah, e minha sugestão é que você escreva mais rose/scorpius shippers.

beijos ]

That was amaizing, what a wonderful story! I especially liked the end, the way Rose tries to apologize over and over again in different ways, it felt right, somehow.

I loved it!

awesome job, dear author friend! :)