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hypheniated
2009-10-19 . chapter 2
Deidara is sweet. He cares. :D

totally for the joining of Team Hebi and Konoha!

hahahah. jealousy (however lousy Itachi is at it) suits him.

you totally stole Shino's 'other kunoichi' thing from me. XD

I love crass Ino. Seriously. Just as much as I love succubus Ino.
hypheniated
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
pretty sure that your SaiIno and KibaIno fangirls can get along :P mine do.

Nah, I bet she'll do the breaking. XD

wonder why he kept her though...
Sasural
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
Hehe another Itahana! Hana does belong to Itachi no one else! Please update soon!
Music Lover Always
2009-09-14 . chapter 2
OOMG I love your story! you must update very soon or i'll go insane! MUCH LOVE TO THE PEOPLE!
cardboard boxes
2009-09-12 . chapter 2
...wow. that's...um...dark. well. it's good. so no complaints here. deidaraxhana smatterings? ooh la la. :)
The Lord's Fallen Angel
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
I like it so far, there's not many ItaHana stories out there.

Update soon!
Cheese Maiden
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
Itachi and Hana are so delicious together. When he said "YOU" a shiver ran down my back. I can picture him being mad and jealous and looking down right sexy. I think once Hana gets over her angry she will have to work really hard not to have her sweet way with him.

Thanking you for the Deidara and Hana moment. If Hana interacts more with him I can see her falling for him, especially if Itachi acts like a jerk to her. I have a feeling that this will be a good love triangle. Kisame acting all mother hen is funning.

I am like Sakura where it is damn hard for me to keep a secret. I wonder what punishment Tsunade will give her. Kiba and Ino will make a interesting couple. Plus if she has something going on with Sai he might feel jealously.
CCRox4Eva
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
Lol coolies! Poor Kiba, he isn't gonna take that lightly! Sakura you should'nt have told him yet! Damn you Itachi for that Tsukuyomi! Deidera was sweet, aww he tried to help, so cute! =)

And bless Ino hehe

-x-Emma-x-
CCRox4Eva
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter! Poor Hana, Itachi's so ... gr -_- hehe ... the opening flashback was totally awesome! When he appeared behind her I was like WOO! SASUSAKU TURNED TO ITAHANA! WOO! =D

-x-Emma-x-
stitch62603
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
I loved this chapter^^ You did a good job with Itachi and Deidara was good. Good job.
stitch62603
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
You're doing fine with Itachi. Just keep practicing^^

I love a good dark fic XD
Dictionary Ink
2009-09-11 . chapter 2
*twitch* Don't remind me, it's bad enough as it is. I'm too upset to EAT.

Tsunade is win. XD Like, a hundred timers more win then I could ever HOPE to be. SHE'S JUST SO COOL!

Hana's got so much balls. It makes me giggle in happiness. Itachi's like "...Wow, hawt."
Even though he's such an ass. It's amazing. You make my writing of Itach look even more fail-ish then it normally is. DX

AW, IT'S DEI-DEI-CHAN! YAY! *glomps him* HE'S SUCH A CUTE LITTLE TEENAGER, I WANT HIM. ...Tee-hee, Hidan. He's such a slut. And a sadist, but the slut part actually makes me giggle SO HARD. Sasori is teh kyootness. ^_^

Kisame is WI-I-I-I-I-IN.
And he so totally knows. Because he is just cool like that.

AGH, KIBAINO! *flails around* (I actually squealed out loud, I'm not even kidding...) I like Ino's “Well, can I come or do you have enough tits to go and do it on your own?” line. It's epic dear. Ep-ic-c-c-c-c-c! OH YE-S!

"Other kunoichi"? Really, Shino? REALLY?

I want Sakura to beat Sasuke AT LEAST twice. He NEEDS it. LIKE, SO BADLY. And the KibaIno will just make me flail around in happiness, like always (ADMIT IT, IT'S THE KYOO-OO-OO-OO-OO-OOT-NESS!) Ne, why is Shino part of the rescue party? ...Poor Shino, everyone ignores him...

You just an epic Sara-review. LE WIN.
cardboard boxes
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
oh wow. that was...intense. keep on going.
Cheese Maiden
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
I like the dark Itachi, because he is even more sexy. You do dark very well. Was Itachi jealous when Kisame comment about Hana, and is Hana a virgin? Because if not would that anger Itachi.
Dictionary Ink
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
RED is win. Oh ye-s.

O_O ITACHI, YOU BASTARD, YOU DO NOT TELL SOMEONE YOU LOVE THEM AND THEN DIS-A-PPEAR. THAT IS A D*CK MOVE. A D*CK MOVE. (And the asterix are there, just in case FF decides that it doesn't like me.)

Oh, Hana is so cool... Stupid Ita-kun.

OH, YAY, COOL FIGHT SCENE! Seriously, that fight scene is a hundred percent WIN.

Yay, Hidan's a whore. XD That makes me so happy, for unknown reasons. I can just see it - after he's gone and screwed the chick, he'd sacrifice her to Jashin-sama! XD

Itachi... a cat person? ... Erika... You are just made of so much awesomness, I can't even BEGIN to describe it. XD

Wow, Itachi's turned on by the weirdest things...

Nah, you didn't fail at writing Ita-kun. It was way better then I could have done. *head-desk* YAY NARUHINA! And OMYFUCKINGGOD, I KNEW IT WOULD HAPPEN! THE KIBAINO FANGIRL WILL WI-I-I-I-IN! BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Seriously, your KibaIno fangirl and mine together... that might be bad.

Anyways, UPDATE WOMAN, UPDATE. YES.
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