 CherryxDarling 2009-12-10 . chapter 1Hm. This was interesting.
ANASTASIA IS MY FAVORITE MOVIE EVER. I know it's weird but I watch it like once a week. And it was my favorite movie when I was younger. So I was surprised to see that you had written fiction for it. (: |
 slavetothekeyboard 2009-09-28 . chapter 1Do I even have to say it's awesome? |
 Lady Cheshire 2009-09-27 . chapter 1Exceptionally beautiful. What a lovely piece of art you've crafted here, thank you! |
 sweetcandyzz 2009-09-26 . chapter 1I like it! :D, but i think there's a slight error in it. Because if i remember correctly, Dimitri and Vlad never knew that the music box WAS a music box(i think they even mistook it for a jewelry box).And the music box could never open unless the locket was used.
anywho, it was still a great read. Thank you for writing it! |
 Britney628 2009-09-19 . chapter 1This is good, very good. You obviously have it in you to write. It's very artistic, and poetic, very beautiful. Your sentences have a harmonic flow. I'm so glad you chose to write about Anya and Dimitri. Would you write more about them? I'd definitely read any future related stories. You're one of the best authors I've found on this site. |
 Phoenix Satori 2009-09-15 . chapter 1Exquisite. |
 An FF Lurker 2009-09-11 . chapter 1 Your writing is so good, too good. I only wish to write as well as you do. (My attempts may end up looking like downright plaigarism, but it's a start...)
Every. Damned. Sentence. is artistry in its own right. I can't really criticize something so beyond my range. Maybe somebody will find something to help you improve, but not I. Your voice, your ideas, you words!- too inspiring.
Keep improving; keep writing. It's a beautiful talent you have and I envy and admire you. |
 heavenlyhuntress 2009-09-11 . chapter 1This is beautiful. Really, really beautiful. It captures the eloquence and futility of the movie and the feelings of the characters. Love the idea of the italics for the dialogue. |
 AwkwardlyAwesome 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Anastasia was my favorite movie when I was younger... Learning the real story about what happen kind of made it loose it's magic, though. I like how you tied in the real events with the fictional world and made it an interesting mix. You've got a great writing style. |
 bobalinabokonon 2009-09-10 . chapter 1 This is good and subtle (sort of?) and I like how the title isn't objective (I think)--it makes the story less of a summary and more of a, you know, story. I think maybe. |
 Unlucky-amulet 2009-09-10 . chapter 1Aww, I love the way you words things. It was just so bittersweet, this story, and the dialogue seemed so real. Like I could actually imagine the characters saying these things. Dimitri's denial added a really nice tone to the whole thing, trying to keep Anya/Anatasia seperate. Hope you write more Anatasia stories!
~Amu |
 nachtweiss 2009-09-09 . chapter 1 I like this very much. This movie used to scare me so much when I was little because of Rasputin, but I still loved it. You did it justice. Very good story. |
 Poppy.Tach 2009-09-09 . chapter 1A-MAY-ZING as usual! i love the way you write. it just...idk it wraps me and up and takes me to whatever world or place you take me to. ive read all your stories, even if i dont know the pairing because i just love the way you write.
i loved anastasia too; i have the vhs but my brother broke the vcr so i cant watch it anymore. but i still have it anyway lol. |
 Frogster 2009-09-09 . chapter 1Great job! I love that movie. I love seeing it from Dmitri's point of view.
But I always thought that Dmitri and Anya/Anastasia were the same age. |
 Diamondeyed 2009-09-09 . chapter 1 This is very sweet, and your imagery is fantastic, especially the line "His princess disappeared nearly ten years ago, buried in red snow." Very evocative. |