Um...the part at the end where it says that Ryodan glances at the body, you should kind of separate the parts, because when i read it i thought, it was still in the same place. Other than that, i loved it. I love the Kaye and Roieben series, so good luck! And my series, Night Riders is coming out in two days, so if you would check it out or spread the word that would be great!

This was excellent, and I really loved it.

That was an Interesting little drabble.

Still waiting to read Dreamfever, but I got the gist of this fic.

Good Job!

Haven't read the ...book?

:P

But it was awesome.

Hahaha.

He killed her and stuff.

LOL.

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Taluliaka