this is the biggest phail ever! i'd red this upto the 15th chapter, and then figured i'd have to read descartes, just to have some more context for further chapters, wento through 72 looong (tho brilliant) chapters of that, came back here, and realized that there was only one more chapter of this story left. which makes me feel really sheepish, but also satisfied - i've been reading ST fics for the last week or so, and it's been great so far

hahaha omg that is soooo... idk, ridiculously vulcan? i REALLY don't usually do these chapter-by-chapter review, but this was just too awesome :)

i don't usually do chapter reviews, just leave a review when i catch up to the latest chapter, but i just had to say that these three chapters were brilliant. i liked the previous ones as well, but these have such raw emotion in them, it's perfect. excellent work. i don't know why i haven't tried startrek fandom earlier. i'm an avid HP fan, and have been reading through some ST2009 stories for just the last few days - so far, i am amazed by the quality of writing and all the characterizations, and have actually managed to find a character that i like more than snape :)

Ok

second to last Chapter made me cry, this made me crack up. It combines everything I don't like about logical illogical Vulcans.

Thank you for writing

Krums

Hi

Actually I find Tyback Is the most logical Vulcan ever. He has a pragmatic logic without the preformed opinions (might I even say prejudice) many Vulcans (at least in your universe) seem to have. When he faces a problem or new situation he actually has an open mind to seek new Solutions. Perhaps because he only has a ‘human’ memory and doesn’t remember everything, thus has to treat every situations a new one?

Just some musings on my part why I find Tyback so much more truly stone cold logical than the other Vulcans.

Greetings

Krums

This was such a bittersweet view of two hurt people making the best of their situation. I love how deeply and thoroughly you've thought of the macro effects of the loss of Vulcan on the survivors, and then applied them to three little people living their lives. I love that, in the end, Keval and Magda both decided to be as happy as they could be where they are. There is a lot of dignity and honor in their choices and it was a real pleasure to read about them. Thank you so much for sharing this! :)

Why do I get the strange feeling she'll end up with Sarek? (wishful thinking I suppose)

Hey you are going to finish this right? This story has so much potential, please don't leave me hanging waiting for resolution!

I love this story! I have to say that I must have come back and read it over dozens of times...and each time it just blows me away! I hope you continue with these little pieces!

Alright, this is amazing :) I love how original you are, and how human you make the *Vulcan* :) It's so interesting.

Oh my god I love this fic so much :) I have to read all of it now Anyway, love all the little bits of insight into different characters and, going with the general plot, the interactions of humans and Vulcans :)

Well I did get to the bottom it (this including the first chapter of the new story with them was about an hour and a quarter's worth of reading :) and I like it. It was *interesting*, as I've said before. Oh, and I've had some theories; did you plan for this trio to be *just a bit* like Spock, Kirk, and Uhura? With their respective counterparts somewhat obvious, I only wonder if it was intentional? Super-smart blond haired ADD (perhaps going a little too far when relating to Jim on that one? Lol ;) boy, and a male Vulcan caretaker. They have the same type of bond, mentally, as in traits and how they react to each other... I know it's a stretch, but it's like Jim is a little kid and Spock is his caretaker. Anyway, I'm curious now and I'm off to read the rest of your newer story :)

Wow, that's a revelation.

The Seven Year Debt chapters...exceptional! thank you :)

I like what you did here...showing how a good marriage doesn't necessarily mean that the parents love each other, and how staying together for the children can be rewarding instead of something to suffer through.