WOW, i think role play is a healthy thing to have in a relationship! :) love the one shot, you should write more of this.

Man, that was amazing and I loved the twist at the end. Great job!

oh that was so hot! I love the way they were already married :P

Much love!

Hot... and cute at the same time...

Nice *smirk*

So f'ing hot!

I could *swear* I'd read this one back during the FTLOJ contest, but it was like reading a brand new fic! And strangely, I didn't leave a review the first time around? Wow. The only defense I have is that I think the contest took place before I fell in love with J/B pairings, and I probably meant to get around to reviewing, but I'd read like 40 contest entries, and...you know how that goes.

But anyway, that was totally HOT. I-might-be-drooling hot. I just had to tell you. Great job lovey!

That was a fun and sexy little romp. Well done!

great twist. Very hot indeed, damn! *Snuze fans herself vigorously*

loved the one-shot, )

best wishes, Linda

Wow! Didn't see that coming, but I'll be damned... that was hot! :)

DOOD! I had to go back and read the end cause I missed the line about picking up Thai food by mistake. All I read was him pulling out his wedding ring and I was like ::GASP:: CHEATER!

HAHAHAHA

Anyhoo- LOVED the twist at the end. This. Whole. Story. Was. Hot.

But I am a Jackpser girl after all! ;)

3 your face!

LiLi

LOL. I love this story. It's such a good time. I love B/J for some reason, and you hit the nail on the head, so to speak :)

And it's ballsy for you to name their daughter Alice. I like it hahahaha

Pange! I love this one-shot. Such a sexy Jasper ... great job.

awesome!