I must say you have described Dorian perfectly. You see, I have just read The Picture of Dorian Gray in school and I find it to be a moral tale. To me, the ending was disturbing yet it was a warning to those who are corrupt: Sin destroys oneself. Lovely poem take care,
Deidra.

Awesome!
This is REALLY good!
Only thing:
line 6 is a bit forced.
BUT I absolutely LOVE the last three lines.