Good writing here, mate. Carry on.

And so, the little evil geniuses plot, trying to take out our heroes...

I don't know why, but I suddenly got the urge to start narrating. *shrugs* Oh, well. I so can't wait to see more of the mutants! They are so cool! XD

Though, I do feel bad for Lance, having to spy on his friends. Maybe they'll understand? Yeah, even I didn't buy that. ;3

I rather like the name Telford Porter. Interesting fanfic. Carry on.

I love the (new) Brotherhood! They're so funny! I don't envy Toad in the slightest, having to deal with them. They're so funny! I also like the (evil) villians, they're so cute! I can't wait for the next chapter!

great job! i really think this story can go somewhere! dont give up on it! u r n awesome author!

this sounds so cool and awesome! I also love that you have it as a Lancitty fic, or at least have it as a pairing for in here. I can't wait to read what happens next, and I commend you on your goal for 100 chapters, and I wish you luck! ^_^