the element of this story really hit me.
what would Tsuna do exactly if he'd lost his family.
i'm not a big fan of blood and gore but this story is appealing to me in the way that it is believable, something to think about. the best part is where Tsuna constantly say 'one heart for, two heart for, and so on until the end, eight heart for. at the end, it gives the feeling of sadness rather than bloody violence. i like that.

Well, wow.
I admit, I sort of am a little sadistic, here and there, but this was explosive. And by explosive, I mean the most depraved of stories. The plotline was fast-paced, full of rapine and ** but yet so, completely, utterly //believable//. A true portrayal of the world of the mafia; the bloodshed, manslaughter yet loyalty to each other all brought out in the form of one boss who had failed in his ultimate task: protecting his Family. This is definitely a masterpiece, marvellous work!


Favourited. :D


~Autumn

whoa, love it...

Sent chills down my spine. A true masterpiece.

I really liked this (not 'cause I'm sadistic, or anything), but because it's rare for me to find fics where people bring out the worst of the mafia world. Reborn has made it much more light-hearted than it's known to be. I like reading fics and finding out how others think innocent Tsuna is supposed to end up and deal with the life of a mafia boss.

It wasn't that your ending was predictable, but from the first few paragraphs, I could tell that your take on Tsuna would end up killing himself. Erm...I don't know if I worded that quite right, so just ignore it if it doesn't make sense because I'm not quite sure how to say it.

Anyway, I loved this fic for it's dramatic and believable plot. I look forward to reading more from you.

So angsty... but so good... Love!

Sweetie, my effing god you need help. Through flesh muscle and bone, was that repeated for effect? I will assume it was because it was effective. The take on the classic rooks poem one for sorrow, two for joy was lovely and chilling, all at once. You went to a darker place here,I've seen this in you, and it took guts to post it I can't wait for more. Bravo

It was good. Not normally my sort of story, but the anger and despair was... entrancing.

Holy crap! This was amazing! It was so sad and angry, you wrote it beautifully!