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Gabriel99
2009-12-28 . chapter 10
Another great fic! I really enjoy the way you write, and just can't stop reading! Thanks so much for sharing, and I'm very much looking forward to the next installment :)
Mrs.LukeSkywalker13
2009-11-30 . chapter 2
something in the movie always-ed bothered me if there in a different galaxy without christianity how do they have a hell?
good writing by the way :)
Cindrollic
2009-11-15 . chapter 10
Wow, I Loved It. Personally, I Could Do with Less Exclamation Points, But That's Just A Small Gripe.

Can't Wait For One Missed Strike Part I
sweetyamiyugigirl
2009-11-01 . chapter 10
*sniff* PLease update soon on your new story! This is awesome!
Happyfish
2009-10-31 . chapter 10
Are you going to write more of this soon??
HAL-9001
2009-10-22 . chapter 10
For the record, George Lucas has been photographed wearing a "Han Shot First" shirt.

His editing decisions have resulted in much fun being made; perhaps the funniest I have seen is a comic strip of the conversation between Grand Moff Tarkin and Princess Leia:

"No! We're a peaceful planet, we have no weapons -- "
"Don't give me that nonsense! This is the Remastered Edition! Alderaan shoots first!"

Congratulations on many excellent works, and here's to success in the future!
xXJedi Knight BlazeXx
2009-10-20 . chapter 10
Very good story, I loved it. I wonder if Vader will come back to the light side of the Force, I sure hope so. I love Vader (and Anakin) and I hope he comes back. I can't wait for the next book and I hope you post it soon.
~Blaze~
I love dance
2009-10-20 . chapter 10
Thank you for sharing your fabulous work! This was truly a wonderful story and I'm really looking forward to part 3! :)
iloveluke1222
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
omg omg omg omg!

Loved it!

i can't wait for the other one!
Random Reviewer
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
Great job! I have yet to read a story of yours that I don't like. Please post part I soon!
phantom-jedi1
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
I, for one, will be watching for those in-between shots. Part I will be exceptionally interesting, because, as you said, you've pretty much preempted ROTJ by this point, unless DS2 is lurking around somewhere. :)

I like the bits at the end of this chapter about bringing Padme back. Would she indeed be able to accept either part of him, much less all of him? I somehow doubt it, but time will tell.

Until next time,
Phantom Jedi
Andrea Foxx
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
Holy poo-poo, Batman. @_@

Wow. That was possibly one of the best takes I have seen on the end of ESB ever. (Reviewing for both C9 and C10)

The action flowed nicely, which is important in cases where things are so jumbled and hopping from premise to premise.

Though, there's no reason to infiltrate Jabba's palace now, so...?

I wonder if Boba Fett is going to fill that gap... (I hope so, he's loving awesome.)

I eagerly, rabidly await part I. Huzzah for Sunrider! Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzah!
Wings90
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
Well! This epilogue, especially the Vader part... it was brilliant. I kinda feel like this should be called 'A New Hope' :) I'll be keeping an eye out for part I, and I'm really excited to hear that it will be very much different from RotJ. My favorite movie *is* RotJ, but part of what I like about this story is that you dared to make big changes to the storyine--especially in part I.

Thank you for this wonderful story.

-Wings
Desteni
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
Hey I finally caught up on this story (as you finish it...) ^^; Actually it was quite fun to be able to sit down and read it almost all the way through in one go. It's definitely a 'page-turner;' once I started reading I didn't want to stop. Quite enjoyable indeed. I'm certainly curious to see where you end up going with this believable adaptation of the story. Looking forward to more!
Zigflorian
2009-10-19 . chapter 10
Really cool fic! Can't wait for part three :)
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