This is really good! I'd like to see more :D

KazeRose

"It wouldn’t stop crying."

I think the sentence would sound better, if "It" was replaced by "She".

*hopes Leona won't always be frightened of Ben*

Sorry for not reading this right away. I've been busy and saving it for some day to cheer me up. I guess that was today. I stayed home from work with a sore throat, slight fever, and cough.

I love that Johnny and Sue made up. I hate tension between the good guys. And I love that Doom's plan to further drive a wedge between the siblings backfired. :D

A longer chapter, I loved that! hehehe. You did good again with this one. It's was a little weird that Johnny didn't explode when he found out about his father and just forgave Sue, but it's ok.

Now, things complicate a little bit more. I hope you update the next chapter sooner, ok? Great job again.

Thanks for sharing.

Kanny.

ah wow yay udate thank youu! love the chapter cant wait for more please udate soon:D

I really like the fact he forgave her. And I'm so glad that you finally updated! I can't wait to read more, so please do so again as soon as you possibly can! ^_^

Great job, I'm so glad that you made another sequel, and I really hope there's lots of Johnny in here, I just love him. Please update again as soon as you can. ^_^

Ohh, the story just got much better in this chapter! Pleas, post the next one soon! I can't wait much more!

Keep them coming and thanks for sharing!

Kanny.

Aww, poor Johnny and Susan. I hope they can regain the trust that was lost between them. It's going to crush them, especially Johnny, when they find out their father hates mutants. So baby Leona has electric powers, hm? I hope that's just a coincidence and not what I'm thinking.

*smiles sweetly* Thanks for writing more! Your safe from my plunger. *grins evilly* For now...

This is SO not going to help Sue and Johnny's relationship...

Great chapter, please keep 'em coming!

This is really good so far! please update soon!

O.O WRITE MORE! NOW! ( I will sender my plunger of doom after you if you don't!!)

I am happy to see another story from you in this continuing series. Interesting plot line, especially as we know Johnny’s reaction will be violent upon learning the truth about his dad.

I had forgotten how much fun this was to read! :D Please update soon!