 Lilith2007 2009-12-01 . chapter 10Oh. Its over. I'm still crying. It was a beautiful ending. I adore your stories but this one was so emotionally powerful. Thank you for posting it. |
 sundayrain26 2009-12-01 . chapter 10Aw man, you have me crying now. So sweet. I'm so happy that they get to meet their sons again. I love how Greg and John are so much like House. And with a tiny bit of Wilson's heart in there. So adorable.
The character interaction between the lot of them (House and Wilson especially) is just perfect. Totally believable. If a movie or series could be made for a fan fiction, this would be a great candidate.
Chase and his hubby are cute too. :3
I have to let you know that I have absolutely adored this story. It's hard to believe where this story started and just how far everyone has come. The post-apocalyptic world they began in almost seems like it's not even a part of this story, it happened so long ago.
Incredible, fantastic job. Really gorgeous writing. Good portrayal of the characters. Excellent plots. Not too 'perfect' storylines with good, challenging obstacles throughout. Major props to you for such an amazing, touching story. I can't tell you how many times I've cried and laughed over this series.
I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future. =)
<3 |
 tricia-j 2009-11-30 . chapter 10Say it isn't so! I'm crushed to think there won't be more. But a great story and a great ending. |
 thomas hobbs 2009-11-29 . chapter 10bitter-sweet. strange but very rewarding :) |
 anouk zucker 2009-11-29 . chapter 10You promised a bittersweet ending for the story - and here it is! Oh my, I can't believe that this is the end. I've fallen in love with your whole series half a year ago when I was looking for good House-mpreg stories - so very rare and hard to get. I will seriously miss them all, and I will miss pregnant House! I read all the series' installments and followed Remember Zion and Fatherland, always anxiously anticipating the new chapters to be up.
I loved the whole post-apocalyptic atmosphere, the dystopian feel to the story that keeps being lifted by their halting progress into something new that resembles a civil life again.
Great characters, amazing hormone-driven sex, and House.
Thank you so much for writing this!
Jule |
 cathepsut 2009-11-29 . chapter 10The End. Wow. No more sequels, honestly done? Oh well, it was a great ride! Thank you. |
 LoriB 2009-11-29 . chapter 10Beautifully done! I'm sad that Greg was unwilling to make the trip, I hope House lives long enough to see him at some point. So Chase got married and House and Wilson paired off, did Foreman just kind of float between couples? I really like how you tied everything together and it was truly an amazing ride from the very first story until the end. I am truly sad that it's over, I always looked forward to an update for this. Now that you've wrapped up most of your H/W stories, you need to get another one going :) Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful journey with us! |
 blizzardstar2000 2009-11-29 . chapter 10Aww~! That was so sweet, and a lovely conclusion to the story. :) It's wonderful to get confirmation that no matter what happens to House, Wilson will always be the first and foremost lover/partner/husband/adoring companion. God, I love the boys together.
Bit of a continuity squick: House wasn't the Billy Joel guy, was he? That guy was a total stranger; House bailed Wilson out because he saw Wilson go batshit crazy from across the room and went like, "MUST...HAVE..." So yeah. Also, I'm a bit surprised that Greg and John would know who Hitler is (as well as keep the names that House/Wilson gave them), but I suppose the Community ain't that bad after all.
*hugs* This was a lovely conclusion to the story. Thank you so much for writing this! |
 bookfan85 2009-11-28 . chapter 10Awesome ending. Sad to see it end, but all good things must come to a close right? |
 Gertrude2034 2009-11-28 . chapter 10Wow. Just. Wow.
Your writing skills absolutely shone in that chapter. Beautiful phrasing, perfect word choice and such a depth of emotion that I felt every moment of House's pain for his lost children and the desperate joy when they were finally reunited. The fact that only one twin came seemed right, too.
I loved that you had to say "The end and I mean it" -- this has been an epic journey! Thanks for sharing it with us and I'm looking forward to whatever it is that you have up your sleeve for us next! |
 lhoma320 2009-11-28 . chapter 10No! OMG, I loved this story and this chapter was unbelievable. I loved how you handled all their feelings after House's surgery. I've never gone through that but have had friends who have and what you wrote was so close to what they experience.
I loved how Wilson stayed by House. The whole part about Wilson going to find the twins was wonderful. I loved how you wrote them. It made me cry when Wilson found them.
You can't stop here. I want to here how they interact and whether House's boy stays and does the other one come to visit and what happens with that. I'm so sad right now.
Thanks for all of them. I really enjoyed them. :) |
 Rhastahippy 2009-11-28 . chapter 10Oh no the end! I really hate to see this story end, but I LOVE the end of this story. Too bad both boys did not return to House, but the reason why some how makes perfect sense to me. Thanks for a wonderful series of stories which I will reread over and over again I am sure. |
 bookfan85 2009-11-26 . chapter 9looking forward to your next update! |
 ally617 2009-11-17 . chapter 1Love this story and the ones that came before it! |
 blizzardstar2000 2009-11-11 . chapter 9YAY, HOUSE MADE IT THROUGH OKAY! (Hay, that rhymed! :D I love this because I am a dork.) So what's next in store for the Fabulous Four (or Five if you count Brad?) |