Excellent rib tickler, wish I hadn't read it while laid low with flu because I laughed so hard I had a coughing fit and ended up unable to finish reading it for the tears in my eyes.

Very amusing concept, two men discussing housecleaning remedies, and like the author, this reviewer can't abide housework either, so when you're done with the pair of them send them over to me, I can find plenty to occupy them, and while I watch them work, I could maybe come up with another use for that vacuum cleaner!

Thanks so much, cheered me up no end, in spite of the coughing fit. More please!

Nice addition to the first part of the story, definitely amusing.

Tres amusant. Enjoyed it much.

If I wasn't at work (I know, shame shame), I'd be rolling on the floor laughing hysterically.

This is SO going on the favorites list.

I've been sitting here snickering and chuckling...Hilarious and spot on; their voices (especially Dom's) are very clear.

LOL--"The Smile"--I was just watching an episode earlier today and yes, he does have The Smile (tm).

I could totally see String baking bread. It takes finesse, and he's good with his hands, so why not?

As for Michael's mishap...oh, this doesn't bode well...XD

Realmente eso fue muy divertido! y el nivel de humor se adapta tan bien a cada personaje que ha logrado hacerlo creible dentro del universo de la serie. Espero siga inspirado para mas historias!

As inconceivable as I find the idea of Hawke or Michael as cleaning nuts, you've nailed their dialogue in their own voices so very convincingly that I really enjoyed this story. And would very much like to hire one of them to come try out some of those methods. This author also loathes housecleaning. You take Hawke, I'll take Michael

Some great lines in there. I loved how you slipped in "Saved by the Bell."

Loved it! Very funny. Think Tet got the best of the deal though, lol.

Delightful, I laughed so hard my ribs are still aching! Terrific stuff, I really enjoyed it. So nice to have a different spin on things, who says they always have to be so dark and sinister and gloomy. More please.

you have to make one more chapter to see how hawke deals with micheal it would make for a great chapter. i think.
michelle