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aussie mitcham
2009-11-20 . chapter 7
I remember this case and I remember seeing a movie about so I can't wait to have a look at the web page I love how you have brought a real case into your story and one that has be going for a long time can't wait for the next chapter hope it will be soon.
trekfreak2008
2009-11-20 . chapter 7
Once again that was a brilliant chapter, and I think the lyrics to that song go with it perfectly.

What I'm really wondering now is; who did it? It had to be someone he knew- that is jealous of him being with Sarah. Was this person in an episode or an original character, because I'm probably about to scrape through every episode I have for clues...

Looking out for more,
Trekfreak
ece23
2009-11-20 . chapter 7
Hmm, very interesting... I like the information you've given about the Black Dahlia case (I'm too scared to look at the website!), and the way you linked it to Starsky becoming a cop was clever. So the killer knows Starsky pretty well. I just love how Hutch is supporting Starsky here, they work best when they're together! Can't wait for the next chapter
trekfreak2008
2009-11-11 . chapter 6
Woah! I now have... gruesome images in my head...

*swallows*

I like how this is going so far (and if I'm completely honest am getting kinda freaked out by the way Stark's girlfriend was murdered...)

I'm beginning to wonder if maybe this murder is actually linked to the one thirty years ago (maybe it's the same guy who did it!!). The way you're referring back to it certainly makes it sound that way. *strokes beard*

It's good that Hutch is there for Starsky. He truly is a great friend.

Looking out for more!
Trekfreak
brook5
2009-11-11 . chapter 6
wow...that was a great chapter...cant wait to see what happens here
ece23
2009-11-11 . chapter 6
Hey, just found this story and I love it so far. The guys are totally in character, and your descriptions are so good that they make me picture the scenes in my head. And that murder is just brutal, but this is a very interesting plot. Now I can't wait to know what Starsky tells Hutch!
aussie mitcham
2009-11-10 . chapter 6
I would really love the next chapter I fill so sorry for Starsky I would be so hard for him to work this case but with Hutch by his side he will do it can't wait for the next chapter.
Sparkle731
2009-11-10 . chapter 6
I like the way this story is going so far and the research you have done into the black Dahlia murder. Can't wait to see what Starsky has to tell Hutch. I also like the way you had the medical examiner give some triva info about her injuries.
trekfreak2008
2009-10-29 . chapter 5
Yikes, this guy is sick and twisted. How can he not care that he just murdered the woman he loved out of revenge?? And then going back and WATCHING everything unfold... he's proud of his crime isn't he?

It isn't easy writing from a killer's POV (especially that guy), but I think you did well. It gives us an insight into what he's feeling and why he's doing this.

I sure hope they catch him and give him a triple life sentence.
trekfreak
trekfreak2008
2009-10-29 . chapter 4
Well that was...graphic. Cor..

*cut in half?!!* They better find the person who did this, and the reason they murdered her so brutally.

I hope Starsk will be ok.. and thank God for Hutch. He's always there when Starsk needs him.
trekfreak2008
2009-10-29 . chapter 3
She honestly thought they were talking about...? he he. That part really made me laugh!

Yet again Hutch has managed to turn the situation around so that he's given out his number... I'm enjoying this fic so far; you've got the characters down to a T!

Oo, they found the body. I hate to think what they'll find (but being me I have to find out anyway, no matter how gruesome it could be)

Trekfreak
trekfreak2008
2009-10-29 . chapter 2
Oh lol, I could just picture that scene with Starsky's car happening!! At least he eventually saw the funny side.

I wonder what he'd do if he ever got anything more than a scratch on it in a car chase?

You know for a minute I thought somebody had discovered the woman's body and that was why Starsk was so annoyed... it's another cliffhanger!

Ok, at this point I absolutely HAVE to keep reading, no doubt about that, so this review is gonna be cut short... :D

trekfreak
trekfreak2008
2009-10-29 . chapter 1
Hey, I just found this story, and so far I love it!!

I like the way that you managed to portray the murderer's thoughts when he was carrying out the crime; it was creepy. He knows he's killed somebody (somebody he apparently loved, no less), yet he doesn't bat an eyelid.

Does this mean that it's someone that Starsky knows at the moment, on the force, or was it someone from his past? Also, I'm interested about how the 30 year old crime links in with this.

Well, onwards to read the next chapter!

PS, how's college going so far? Hopefully their not smothering you with homework!
Trekfreak
aussie mitcham
2009-10-28 . chapter 5
Thanks for another great chapter i really can't wait to see what happens now so can I have the next chapter please.
brook5
2009-10-05 . chapter 4
thats was a great chapter..poor starsky
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