 ji 2009-11-11 . chapter 1 well what are you waiting?
update please
it is killing me the wait jajaja
bye
love your fic |
 jan 2009-10-25 . chapter 1 I like it
please keep the good work
and update soon onegai
byee |
 FreyaLin 2009-10-11 . chapter 1...omgawd...that was awesome! XD altho Yoh was a bit of a goof lol but yes! multi chappie please! make it more steamy or what not! just MORE!
btw...i love how you didn't make anna all OC and all that...kudos for keeping them in character! |
 MiSs LiSsi LisS 2009-10-07 . chapter 1This was really good! I love would to see more! I love your vocabulary! It wasn't bland like most stories [mine >.>] hehe Keep up the good work!! |
 Chibasnoopy 2009-10-04 . chapter 1Not bad, really, not bad. Passionate and yet at the same time subtle. Favorited |
 Alltogether.Seperate. 2009-09-14 . chapter 1You are a freakin awesome writer!
I was wondering when Anna was gunna clobber him. That was awesome.
Love your writing.
Keep experimenting with Shaman King. I think you could get a lot of stories out of tha manga.
-Skyler |
 Animewitch17 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Multi-chapter fic, multi-chapter fic, multi-chapter fic!! This is a really great story! Poor Yoh, but atleast he got what he wanted :3
And Amidamaru was funny too! Bet he didn't see the kissing XD Reminds me of that chapter where Yoh and Anna "supposedly" kissed, and Amidamaru was like, "No, must not watch!!"
Please make this into a multi-chapter fic. It's really good!! ^_^ |
 Milli Tora 2009-09-11 . chapter 1For your first try, this is surprisingly good. =D Hello! I am not dead and the reason I haven't been reviewing as much is because my computer broke down (the motherboard is dead T-T) so I am temporarily without a computer. But please note that I will try to get to your most recent work read and reviewed the minute I have access to a keyboard. XD Anyway, back to my review! As usual, you have kept the characters in-check. Given the situation, I felt that I have this plot somewhere before, but I think you made it fit them very well. And the plot it self is interesting, so if you want to continue the story, be my guest. It would make me very happy at having to read another good Yoh/Anna fic. =D Wonderful writing as always, I can't wait for the next part!! |
 Nightglider 2009-09-11 . chapter 1 Cuutee! *swoons* |
 djyxa 2009-09-11 . chapter 1please UPDATE soon! i can't believe it's your first shaman king fanfic. you did a great job, though! :D |
 Smart Angel 2009-09-10 . chapter 1Aw! That was really cute and really sweet!! Your first Shaman King fanfic? I hope to read more of them soon! We need more YohXAnna fanfics! =D
Maybe next time it won't be a one shot? *-* |
 Keitorin Asthore 2009-09-10 . chapter 1This is great! It's romantic, yet true to the characters. I hope you write more stuff! |
 hannami08 2009-09-10 . chapter 1cute!^_^ there's nothing wrong with giving things a try at least. so i suggest you may put all the ideas that come into your mind into writing. i would want to read more of your works.=) |
 Chibi Shirayuki Chan 2009-09-10 . chapter 1so cute X3 |