|Reviews for The Reason|
| beatlesfan931 9/11/09 . chapter 1
It's pretty well-written, though I'm curious about a lot of the details of the events that happened in the prologue (such as overthrowing Makuamage and the deaths of the Tsujigiri). It kind of leaves the reader feeling like there's something important that they're missing, and thus unsatisfied. Were those things explained in further detail later in the work? That's the only major flaw that I noticed, though it might not be a flaw if you end up publishing parts that explain those things.
Now, the good: I see a lot of potential for great humor here, and I know you're more than capable of it. I also enjoyed reading your interpretation of Seppukumaru's past. Your control of the language is also great, I was really drawn into this story with the little I've read so far.
Overall, I'm really looking forward to seeing more, if you decide to publish. Keep up the good work, you're a much better author than you think you are!