brilliant! maybe even better than silphers! good job you didnt go into too much detail in the chapter :17 - love and war, although personally i would love to unzip tulia's bra. :) (not me in real life, thats NuffTheSlig talking right there, everything i say on this site is in character, except this, so i'll stop, from now on, nuff) anyway great fanfic! was shocked at the return of the dead scrab! assuming there will be another sequel? i hope it will be from lorns perspective! you know, lorn's pack, that would be brilliant, glad to see tule and silph finally said kanako!

overall, fan-fic tastic!

Great sequel, can't wait to see what happens next