 nishanthy 7/25/10 . chapter 3I think you use the word "glare" incorrectly. You should use "looked at," "gaze," or something like that |
 PrincessRotation 9/24/09 . chapter 5WRITE MORE!
yeah, the episode sucked, i like this version so much better!
AND I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
please :D |
 LilyAyl 9/20/09 . chapter 5This is a fun story. I enjoyed the change from canon and I really do want more as the two figure out what the hell they're supposed to do now. |
 Romance and Musicals 9/20/09 . chapter 5This was so good. I LOVED the whole snowstorm metaphor, it was really cute. Aww, Freddie was so sweet. But, a tip for your writing: If you're telling the story in third person, don't use terms like f*d up, because it sounds unprofessional. If the story is in first person, then it's alright. I totally agree with the iThink They Kissed thing. I was like WTF? Cuz it just like ended. I liked the "Sam thought her thumb was missing. Was it? NO!" lol. And I agree they TOTALLY enjoyed the kiss because they were all awkward and hesitant. |
 Emilyxxxx 9/20/09 . chapter 5awesome
please upload |
 Xx-Cabbie-Seddie-Cailey-xX 9/13/09 . chapter 4I WANNA READ MORE! HURRY UPS! haha i love it! this could be like what happens in another ep! like the who sit on lap part! hehe
FIGHT MIGHTY SEDDIE WARRIORS! |
 PinkPoodle543 9/12/09 . chapter 4Dangit xD Stupid cliffhanger, lol. Oh well v.v Looks like I gotta wait for the next chapter.
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 Emilyxxxx 9/12/09 . chapter 4ur welcome
your derserved it
please update soon
ps. Can't wait for the new icarly episode |
 Romance and Musicals 9/11/09 . chapter 4Great job! This is really good! Go Sam! Ha ha Freddie's get-a-way was an epic fail! |
 Kilala-kun 9/11/09 . chapter 4I LOVE IT! Spencer was funny as heck, Sam & freddie's thoughts were what they should be & the kiss was pure POETRY! The only that I didn't like was the fact that you left it a cliffhanger, so UPLOAD ALREADY! I'm between two options: a) Sam knocks freddie unconcious or b) she shuts him up with a kiss. Knowing the story, I'm pretty sure it's the latter. UPLOAD OR FEEL MY CYBERNETIC WRATH!
PS: it's okAy. For future reference. |
 ThriLLer89 9/11/09 . chapter 4I'm the queen of cliffhangers! lol. I enjoy making people anticipate!
KEEP GOING! lol. I'll be waiting! |
 Shazzam27 9/10/09 . chapter 3cool. wonder what the twist is?
liked the whole tv-caught-on-fire! hilarious!
update soon! |