((reviews, even though this was written ages ago...))
okay, this story is starting to feel particularly weird in an ooc way...you also seem to treat them as if they where human and falling into some cliche or other.
Azira's behavior is bizarre because it's pretty clear he's not all naive nor innocent in the books; approving for guns in "negotiations", arranging to kill a 11-year-old, ranting how heaven is propaganda, etc lol
Same rant could continue to other charas...
Particularly have to wonder what God is playing at; what happened to the "Ineffable Plan"?

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.
just wow, I completely and utterly loved it
wow
xx

I don't normally leave reviews in the middle of a story -- I wait until the end to review (or not, if I'm lazy.) But I just got tea on my laptop due to laughing at an inconvenient moment due to this set of lines:

“Okay. Let me call in sick. You do realize, of course, that you’re leaving our only daughter in the hands of the Antichrist?”

“I can’t think of a safer place on Earth.”

Congrats. That hasn't happened to me in _years_!

O.o *clap clap clap* really good story. Believable, angsty in the right moments, good dialogues, nice. Everyone IC, properly spellchecked, yay!

Great story!
It's been so long since I've read anything longer than a oneshot in this fandom, and your piece was quite a nice return to it. I loved how you portrayed heaven, hell, god and the games-- very, very nice. An excellent read!

Darn it! I just lost The Game...AGAIN.

Sweet. I liked it. I had a point, but I don't remember it.

__“You’re sending me after the Metatron alone?”

/No, I’m sending you to Hell, to find Crawly, who will assist you in overthrowing the Metatron, and redeem himself, and you two can make happy angel babies while I rearrange the plazas of Heaven in an aesthetically pleasing manner. How does that strike you?/ asked God.

Aziraphale choked on his tea. __

Whee!

*Fangirly sigh* Excellent. You reminded me a lot of Pratchett and Gaiman in your style, and the "Bucaw" thing was hysterical. The Crowley/Aziraphale and Anathema/Newt were absolutely gorgeous to read. I enjoyed it muchly.

Damn, this is a good story.

Yay! This story is on my favorites list- I love it!

Great story.

I really liked this. I haven't read much good omens fanfic, but everything i've read has been Az/Cr and I think they are the PERFECT pair ~_^. This was a fantastic fic, filled with adventure, humor(sarcastic satire type, much like the original book) and tender romance.

Wow. I'm in 'wow' mode right now. I mean, really. I think this is the only story that made me laugh outloud hysterically in the middle of the climax without losing any momentum. (I mean, really. Buckaw?) I mean, wow. Feeling major ficlove here. *sighs blissfully*

Anyway... to get to another of my points, which I have in abundance, apparently... I'm putting together a Good Omens archive (http://destined.to/theflamingbentley) and... well it's looking rather naked at the mo. I was wondering if you wouldn't mind helping me clothe it? You can email me at domlooksreallygoodineyeliner@ if you're interested.

Thanks for the excellent read!*
Kristie

*Yes, that's shameless flattery

Squee! That was adorable. You've made me miss my planned bedtime by over an hour. Phoo XD