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   bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 10He gonna be in trouble And I guess he knows |
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 8 Glad mike got the picture |
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 7 She slipped and he caught it, I wonder if he can put two and two together |
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 4 They don't see the similarities |
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 3 So he doesn't like that they have money and took over a smaller business? Thinking that they are ruining it like most rich people come in and do. |
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 2 Love Edwards nick names for rose jazz and em |
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 1 Uh oh, this should be interesting? But ur summary says they hate each other, that kids sucks |
| DepressionMaker 10/8/11 . chapter 23 omg i nearly died laughing |
| BabyBear08 10/8/11 . chapter 23 Great outtake, I can only imagine the conversation between the parents! |
| How.does.this.work 10/8/11 . chapter 23 aww wow! bless Edward! it's so sweet to see Esme and Carlisle's realationship. :) |
| Maxi Fallon 10/8/11 . chapter 23 Lol! Funniest thing ever! Loved it! Poor Edward! Oh well Bella went through it so dies he! |
| iluvtwilightmre 10/1/11 . chapter 22 Beautiful, beautiful story- thank you for taking the time to write it :) I too am sad, but I trust you as an author to know when the time to end, is well, at an end. I look forward to reading whatever you put forth! |
| Maxi Fallon 9/16/11 . chapter 22 Hi! I just finished reading this! I love it! It's amazing! You have real talent! There were some parts where I wished you went into more detail but overall I loved it! This is one of the sweetest stories I've come across! Tayna was a bitch! I like Jacobs part in all of this! Wow James is a real jerk! I feel so sorry for Victoria! I hope you do put up that outake! I'm sure it will be funny! |
| youngandmature 9/11/11 . chapter 11 How come B hadn't confided in E about her poems though? She seemed to know and like him just as much as EC? Also, when B first finds out about E reading her journal and she's upset - after the anger - as she thought they were becoming more and now tha was all ruined; does it really have to be? Sure it was a crappy thing of E to do but it doesn't seem so drastic to end a friendship/relationship over. (also, don't know if you remember me, but I've read this story before. Was thinking about it the other day and had the urge to re-read so here I am). |
| shelllynn22 9/8/11 . chapter 22 AWESOME story.I love that there was no life or death drama, this is the first fanfic I have read that didn't have it and i have read 70 or great job. |
