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| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 10
He gonna be in trouble
And I guess he knows
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 8
Glad mike got the picture
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 7
She slipped and he caught it, I wonder if he can put two and two together
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 4
They don't see the similarities
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 3
So he doesn't like that they have money and took over a smaller business? Thinking that they are ruining it like most rich people come in and do.
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 2
Love Edwards nick names for rose jazz and em
| bbeccaz 10/9/11 . chapter 1
Uh oh, this should be interesting? But ur summary says they hate each other, that kids sucks
| DepressionMaker 10/8/11 . chapter 23
omg i nearly died laughing
| BabyBear08 10/8/11 . chapter 23
Great outtake, I can only imagine the conversation between the parents!
| How.does.this.work 10/8/11 . chapter 23
aww wow! bless Edward! it's so sweet to see Esme and Carlisle's realationship. :)
| Maxi Fallon 10/8/11 . chapter 23
Lol! Funniest thing ever! Loved it! Poor Edward! Oh well Bella went through it so dies he!
| iluvtwilightmre 10/1/11 . chapter 22
Beautiful, beautiful story- thank you for taking the time to write it :)
I too am sad, but I trust you as an author to know when the time to end, is well, at an end. I look forward to reading whatever you put forth!
| Maxi Fallon 9/16/11 . chapter 22
Hi! I just finished reading this! I love it! It's amazing! You have real talent! There were some parts where I wished you went into more detail but overall I loved it! This is one of the sweetest stories I've come across! Tayna was a bitch! I like Jacobs part in all of this! Wow James is a real jerk! I feel so sorry for Victoria! I hope you do put up that outake! I'm sure it will be funny!
| youngandmature 9/11/11 . chapter 11
How come B hadn't confided in E about her poems though? She seemed to know and like him just as much as EC?
Also, when B first finds out about E reading her journal and she's upset - after the anger - as she thought they were becoming more and now tha was all ruined; does it really have to be? Sure it was a crappy thing of E to do but it doesn't seem so drastic to end a friendship/relationship over.
(also, don't know if you remember me, but I've read this story before. Was thinking about it the other day and had the urge to re-read so here I am).
| shelllynn22 9/8/11 . chapter 22
AWESOME story.I love that there was no life or death drama, this is the first fanfic I have read that didn't have it and i have read 70 or great job.