LMFAO.

I can't stop laughing.

Oh God, this is HILARIOUS!

I am all for writers exploring unusual pairings, but the LW/Charon fics are usually just ridiculous. I feel this is probably the most accurate representation of ghoul/human sex.

Really fun. Awesome job!

I came.

I actually thought this was pretty amazing, as in funny amazing.

I did curiously walk around looking a ghoul faces on the game after ward to see if they didn't have lips... they do.. sort of, well Willow does! lol.

I did wonder though how he could feel her touching his penis but not feel it fall off... I know for damn sure that I would feel my penis fall off if I were a guy! Now thing about seeing into his stomach, he is a ghoul not the living dead, he wouldn't survive something like that for long her would still bleed out. His skin is really the only thing effected by the radiation and some internal organs. (Such as his testicles) I mean you don't see over radiated cancer patients walking around with their guts hanging out, do you? its about the same concept. They green in their skin is most likely gangrene. From the looks of it. So he wouldn't be walking around with a gaping whole.

Other than that the story was all sorts of hilarious! You did a wonderful job, keep up the good work!

I haven't laughed that hard at a fanfic in a long time. XD Poor Betty. That had to be awkward as hell.

I happen to really like LW/Charon.

THANK YOU. Thank you so much. I like the idea of simple companionship between the two. Sure more than friends, but goddamit he's a fucking ghoul. I'd be surprised if he even had his dick left.

It's like no one cares about writing an actual story about the two. They want to skip to the sex and they even get that wrong. It's a rotting, irradiated corpse, so if one is going to go that route, do it accordingly. Like a sick fetish of sorts. I guess necrophilia would do in that case.

Just thank you.

WTF? This stuff is crazy...is there actually people who write things like that about ghouls? WEIRD...

I happened across your profile by an unlikely set of links, and after a quick glimpse over your fiction, decided "why not?" I'm not completely absorbed with the idea of Charon getting lucky, but when I saw that your story was a parody, I had to check it out.

Unfortunately, there isn't a way to convey copious amounts of laughter and mirth over a body of text other than typing something juvenile like:

OH MY GOD LMFAO!

Then again, I could just say I found it quite amusing. But "LMFAO" translates better. Thanks for the laughs.

Haha... that was great. I haven't read any ghoul porn fics, but I'm sure they're all unrealistic. In fact, I think I'll go read some, so I can parody them. That's a wonderful idea you just gave me!

Reading this story made me want to shudder and laugh hysterically at the same time. Good work, and looking forward to the next update to "As the World Turns."

LOL she ripped his dick off! Oh that was just probably the most akward sex ever in the capital wasteland.

XD I have to admit to loving the ghoul love, but that doesn't matter. I've actually thought of that outcome myself and couldn't help but giggle at this.

This is funny, I laughed. Whatever floats your boat as far as not liking ghouls, but the claim of realism I have to call foul on. Fallout ghouls are not undead and they can have sex without falling apart. A quick way to test it in game with Fallout 3: Nova and Gob will flirt madly and sleep together if you kill Moriarty.

Hahahahahaha! That slaps me on the knee! Seriously though, that was great.