Wasn't able to put my name in the last time I revewed but my idea still stands about sonia and manic from sonic underground.

Hay my name is Jacob Deitz I have an idea how about Flare meat his ant Sonia and uncel Manic from the tv show Sonic Underground.

Cool! I Love SonicxBlaze! As well as SonicxSally! When will that Egghead Attack nex! uPDATE sOON!

That was too cute. Flare and Ashly forever! I hope theres more to this.

THis story is so cute. I feel bad for Flare and what happen to him but, I'm glad his back home with his family and friends. I also think that he and Ashly make a cute couple. Too bad the chapters are short :(. I hope there will be more or at least another story that involves Flare and Ashly. :)

If Shadow were only 25 then Sonic wouldn't be alive yet. Shadow was basicaly created as both an experiment and a companion to Maria. He then was put into cryogenic sleep after escaping the Ark for 50 years. This would technically make him 75 in this story.

better than some other stories out there. but i have to say it seems like you're down playing peoples reactions to move the plot. like when ashly's friends found out who flare was, it was down played and they accepted him far to easily. i hope you haven't given up hope and updates soon

So far, a little drama, a little romance, and a little humor. I thoroughly enjoy this story. Please update this.

sorry dude, this story is going no where in perticuler, as im the only person who has reviewed it, i look kinda sad, two its like flare gets kidnapped and he does again. try not to make the same thing happen twice. u do ok but you can improve

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this is a very sad chapter, nice work ive just started my second story 2