cool!

FINISH ALL STORYS FROM 2009!

Ok. the first chapter was really good and it built suspense. But what on Earth happened with the second chapter? I was confused and disappointed. sorry, just trying to help a little. The first chapter was really good though

Where is the next chapter?

SO much better writing than your others. You hafta continue, please? I read your profile before this, and realized what you were doing immediately, but that makes it fun! So plz don't take away the fun by not updating. Update soon!

Whoo i read this and was like 'wait this was on her profile' and also my story except mine had Raven acting like a four year old :)

Smooth Cyborg XD seriously Cyborg is the only person who'd say that at that moment of time XD

This is a good start and can go in many directions which is nice. It'll be good to see what happens in the next chapter :)