So awesome please write more soon!

I absolutly love it!

This is so funny!

You should defiantly continue. Ya got all their personalitys on check.
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I LOVE THIS Honestly, it seems just like the manga Ahh, where have these girls been all my life? NOBUE'S MINE

Yup, everything is as it should be, but...that's my pudding xD! Haha. Yes, you should do a Diary entry, c'mon.

I love this story!

The way you wrote Miu was wonderful xD Please update soon!

Awh this was really cute and damn miu should so pull nobue's towel off in the anime

Woww, great job! Totally believable as highschoolers. Please continue, I want to read more.

Sticks very closely to the feel of the anime. Very nice. I haven't read the manga so I can only compare it to the anime. In this fic, Miu seems a lot crazier than in the anime. Now this could be due to her age, but she somehow seems more sinister here. Well I still got a laugh out of the fact that she was so good at playing dead that she could stand being slapped so much.

I agree that you captured Miu’s personality and idiosyncrasies quite well, however personally I am more impressed with your characterization of Chika. Then again that could just be because I have a soft spot for everyone’s favorite ‘totally generic’ character. _

As for the diary entries, I think it’s an interesting concept and makes for an unique storytelling device... Though I shudder to think of what goes on inside Miu’s mind.

Overall, I can see a lot of potential with this story and would like to see more in the future.