Woah! That was disturbingly awesome! Allen's gone completely round the bend with all that pent up ferociousness, anger, sadness and desperation. Absolutely wonderful, though! Loved how you described the fight; how fragmented it was and the underlying presence of Allen's insane rage. Really looking forward to seeing how his little breakdown will affect the whole story!

Wow.

That was one of the best action sequences in a fanfiction that I have ever read. Really, that was good!

Dammit lenalee, why did you stop Allen?! Cross was finally going to get his ass kicked!! *growls in disappointment* At least the Earl got his ass kicked... I wonder when Road will finally accept Allen?

Awesome! Cookies for you!

Awesome chapter, cookies for you!

oh shi-!
allen broke ...
They are doomed

Uhoh this cant end well very good chapter i enjoyed it immensly.

Whooa Allen cracked! This is a very progressive chapter on the plot, I'd say. Please update ASAP!
I'm really looking forward to Rhode's inner thoughts and reactions hehe

*cue sever eyebrow twitch*


WHY THE HELL IS THIS SO SHORT!

*runs to emo coner and sulks*

u flatter urself. You don't require a knife... a blunt spoon would do just fine :D

joke aside, a rather interesting turn if you ask me. wonder if he'll really gone down the deep end and not return at all. it's interesting how human minds work after all.

well, UPDATE SOON! (^.^)

...oh, and while i don't have blunt spoons, i do have a rather big kitchen knife o.o...

*sharpens knife*

Allen's going insane, teehee?

WHY DO I LIKE THIS FIC SO MUCH?! I DON'T KNOW.

*sharpens her own knife* because you made Road reject Allen. Because you made Allen snap. And because you made Cross dominate Allen without him lashing back. *growls dangerously* I really liked the new update, but I didn't like the way things turned out. At all. I hope that you'll make things better in the next chappy or so. Allen has suffered enough as it is.

O... Allen's finally snapped under all that pressure. Can't wait to see what will come from that!

*mumbles incoherent words*

Aw... Still, it is rather chilling how despite the divergent events, the same people manage to die. Eagerly looking forward to more!