This is very sweet.

A little odd that Jim has wash board abs yet was forced to retire for being not physically fit enough...Just keep in mind all parts of your story matching each other.

Still, very sweet though!

This story made me smile, even with the inactivity of most of the command team. I love how you located them in SoCal; the mellow lifestyle is so strangely contrasting, but it suits them in a way that they'll be able to enjoy the simple pleasures of life. I got my cheese and my nachos, and I thank you for a wonderful story. :)

It was lovely.

Again with the food! I'm staaarving now! hahaha

this was hella cute, sad, but sweet and sexy. I love Kirk/Spock so much.

Okay, so, total lie when you said your other stories weren't as good :) This is the perfect balance to the heart-wrenching chapters of the other story. It's cute and fluffy and makes fangirls like me squeal with happiness. I'm excited to see what else you have in store. Keep it up! :P

-Rose

Well, if you make nachos with all the cheese, can I swim in the fluff? I loved this story, and think that you did a great job capturing Spock.

Fern Rose

The ending made me want to cry. Pathetic, I know. This is a totally new concept to me- you'd think that StarFleet wouldn't want to get rid of it's best and brightest so early, ya know? I always imagined them there forever.

CHESE.

Furry furry chese. D

Aw. Twas cute. 3

It was clever how you linked it to your other story too...but not enough so that people couldn't just read this one.

Sque

You do the characterisation very well!

Very much mush. :D

I believe the phrase I'm searching for is... "DO WANT."

god i can't even tell you how much i love and needed he mature love S/K.

it's just a wonderful thing. and you wrote it beautifully.

Loved it -

Mini-J

That was so sweet! Because, really, everyone needs a little more mush in their lives. ;)

I loved it just the right balance of lust and fluff. :3 Keep it up.

AW DAMNIT BONES! WHAT D'YA HAVE TO MAKE IT SO SWEETLY SAD FOR?

That's pretty much what it is. It's nice and sweet, and I'm gad everyone's happy, but it's kinda sad that they're gone from the Entry Prize, probably forever.

And I definitely think you should elaborate the Sulu/Chekov part of it ;)

This was so good to read, as always, and I don't just say these things cause I'm your friend. I mean it.

Omg! but it's such good cheese!

The best sort, with Kirk and Spock and Them growing old together!

Beautiful.

I love it.

Thank you for sharing!

That was cute. :)