Umm... I don't really get what the heck is going on in this version of your story. It all seems really confusing to me, compaired to the previous/original version. all I can say is that I liked the previous/original version better. I was kind of hoping that you were just re-writing those chps. but, still keeping the plot-line/events the same. But, it kind of looks like a completely differen't story plot-wise. Or is this chp. some sort of weird premonition/dream and it'll go back to where your previous/original " Key Through the Heart " story takes place? Or ARE you making a whole new plot-line for this? I'm hoping that this chp. is just some sort of Dream/Premonition; type thing, and not a complete re-make of the story.

Well, I'll put it on " Story Alert " and see what becomes of this new version. I also, hope that you'll send me a PM regarding my questions. Basically I'm hoping you'll clear up my confusion lol XD Well, take care of yourself.

-DarkDremora4

what's the main pairing for this story? As I recall, it was Naruharem...but Hinata is in that harem right? update soon!

Wow. Great chapter. It was a little hard to keep up though. Update soon?

Make sure this fic has alot of Sasuke bashing!

Great story!

..."Like something easily punched through"? How about styrophome? That's the same stuff packing peanuts are made of; their easy to punch through.
On a more serious note; I see that you are off of indefinate hiatus at last! That brings joy to my heart, it really does. Key Through the Heart was far too good a story to have wasted away to nothing but a memory...
Though, I am confused that you said that this version was more "focused" than the original. I had a bit of a tricky time focusing on WHEN the story is. Are all of the scenes flashbacks? Are they premonitions? Somewhere in between?
In any case, I'll be following this story. I was too big a reader of the original to do otherwise.
Happy to have you back, Talon-san.
-Alchemist Astrid

interesting definition of the phrase "routine mission" you have in here.

This is going to KICK ASS!

Waiting impatiently for the next chapter.

Good Luck with the Writing :)

Does this mean that Naruto is going to go to Twilight Town and meet Sora? I can't wait to find out. Please update again soon.

-Michael :D

Update soon. Oh Yeah, Good Beginning.

Hmm...well as this is the first chapter and you are basically setting things up for the future of your work, I can't honestly say if it's good or not quite yet. Though I was rather in rapt attention with your previous Key through the Heart, I am eager to see what you will bring to the table. I do have one question though. Are you planning to make this story into another harem like last time?

Very impressive! I can honestly say that this is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! While I don't approve of the swearing, that doesn't change the fact that this story was very well done. The action was perfect for writing, and the changes in perspectives, from flashbacks to fight scenes to everyday life, kept the story from becoming monotonous. The idea, along with it's presentation, was very entertaining, and your descriptions did their job well.

I encourage you go on with this story. This makes a good one-shot, but it would make a spectacular story! Besides, you can't leave your readers hanging like that! What does having the Keyblade mean for Naruto? What will he do now that his world was destroyed? (And while I'm thinking of it, nice job on your portrayal of a world swallowed in darkness.)You've left too many questions to leave it at that. Please, go on. Bravo! Encore! Encore!

Woah... AWESOME FIRST CHAPTER! I'm so glad to see that this story is back!

However, I do have a question: Will this "Final Mix" take into account the 14th member of Organization XI, Xion (pronounced "SHI-OWN")? I think that would be pretty awesome!

Speaking of the Organization, will they be appearing at any point in this story?

Keep up the great work,

Tobi Jr

I honestly couldn't find anything wrong with this that needed to be pointed out and corrected, every word was carefully picked and placed, and the descriptions were vivid; as if I were looking at them from where I am now. It was confusing, though, switching from Ayame to him wanting to summon the keyblade, to Ayame, to him summoning a keyblade and being confused... Then falling into nothing. I can see more of a Riku then a Sora at this point, but I'm sure you've got this all planned out. I like what I see, and I hope you update it soon =]

So...what's happening in the prologue? Did Naruto just now get the Keyblade? Or did he get it before this (That's what it sounds like?)? Is this where the story starts or is this a preview of what's going to happen? I'm a bit confused about these points.