|Reviews for Threads of Fate|
| Butterfree 7/31/10 . chapter 3
Definetly an interesting tale you've got going. I'm a bit confused whether it's meant to be an AU or not, but the elements of it definetly spell out 'threads of fate', espeically with the references to destiny.
I love Mint and Maya's personalities here. You've got both of them down quite well, though I did find some scenes to be overly-descriptive. It's almost a bit jarring at how consistant the amount of description is, but using different amounts but keeping it in the same range may be better.
Good luck in any future writting!
| cookiemania789 1/15/10 . chapter 3
This looks interesting.
| ReLiC AnGeL 11/16/09 . chapter 3
What an unexpected turn of events in this fic. _
| DarkmoonFlute288 10/15/09 . chapter 2
Wow, this is fantastic so far. It's an interesting alternate take so far on events we all know and love. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with anticipation.
| Summoner of Dusk 9/26/09 . chapter 2
This looks promising. I especially liked how you fleshed out Mint's background. I can't wait to see what you have in store for her!
| ReLiC AnGeL 9/25/09 . chapter 2
This was beautifully done. I loved it. Even though it was meant to be set at the begining of Mint's game, you've managed to make the plotline flow effortlessly with such lovely details that I couldn't stop reading this. The end really caught me off guard too. _
| Krisini Nanini 9/16/09 . chapter 1
i really don't have a skill on weaving lengthy texts like this. haha i'm more of a poem writer i guess. _ i went over the prologue and it seemed like i'm watching anime _ the imagery is good, the idea very fascinating and you really have a good taste of coherence. you're good in building characters _ rue and mint occupies a part of my mind now, somehow wondering what would happen to their journey next _ keep it up! i'll be your number one audience if you don't mind _
| xXxKatsumixXx 9/12/09 . chapter 1
Oh god! She can't start another adventure! The world will surly perish! Then again I am doing the same thing... oh well, great job! _
| ReLiC AnGeL 9/11/09 . chapter 1
I'm liking the sound of where this story is going. _ You've done a wonderful job at keeping Mint in character. The way you made Mint's memory and the preasent blend well together was flawless and I could easily see that this fic will be entertaining and keep me begging for more. Since you have done a wonderful job at writing this, I'm gonna fave it! -_- I'm waiting to see how the next chapter will turn out.