I really liked that. Very good job. Kind of ironic that there daughter was dying. In a way its almost like..the girl couldnt live because she part of jack and tru. Life and Death. but that is just my wierd idea.

Awe. This is beautifully heartbreaking. Wow. This is really amzing writing. Please keep writing!

really sad but great story!!
well done :)

I loved it! I know that I say that for everything you write, but this was... like ectasy. Totally new expirience. :D

*hugs and kisses*

~Ena.

poor tru and jack so sad but good story telling
maria

How sad! I can't even begin to imagine what a mother and father would feel if their child went into a coma. And Tru being the mother, going into silence is something I can understand.
Thank you for sharing.