 TrishOrton 2009-11-22 . chapter 4Jays making absolutely no progress with Trish. Maybe in time when he starts doing better in wrestling she’ll support him but for now it does have to be all about Sofia |
 TrishOrton 2009-11-22 . chapter 3Sofia is just too cute but what’s happening between Trish and Jay is terrible. They just need to come to a compromise because both sides are understandable |
 ShannonxMoore'sxLoverx 2009-11-17 . chapter 4I love it update soon |
 Glamagirl 2009-11-17 . chapter 4I'm feeling bad for Jay, a little support from Trish is all he needs! Come on Trish, don't be like that =(
I hope Jay starts to earn a little bit of money so he can help Trish with Sofia; sadly, that's the only way Trish is going to get interested in wrestling.
Can't blame her, she needs to look for her daughter and she is doing what she think it's best for her. Jay is too, they problem is that they have different ways of doing it.
Nice update, love it |
 dodjet 2009-11-17 . chapter 4Jay and Trish seem to be drifting apart right now. Poor Jay, he needs the support and yet I understand how Trish needs more stability since they have a child. Hopefully they'll both come to terms with their situation and let love conquer all their problems (yeah I'm a shameless romantic lol) As usual Chris and Stephanie are adorable together. |
 Trishrocks 2009-10-28 . chapter 3 I trish can find a way to let Jay in after all there are meant to be
Good update |
 Daniella Consuela 2009-10-24 . chapter 3Another good chapter here. I hate the rift between Jay and Trish but I understand both sides and I understand completely how Jay feels about seeing your kids and them being the best and most important thing in a parent's life. :-) I'm glad Jay's trying to make friends and that he liked class...I'm just wondering what exactly Trish is gonna do and how her and Jay are gonna fare without one another. Can't wait for more. On to other stories I go. |
 Glamagirl 2009-10-23 . chapter 3Aww! I feel bad for Jay, it must be hard to be all by himself and without the support of the one person he loves the most =(
and it's not like I can't see Trish's pov, but it will do wonders to Jay's motivation if he could have Trish there with him... |
 Effie 2009-10-21 . chapter 3 I love how this story is going. You need to update this story more often. :] I feel so bad for Christian and I can't wait to see him get his big break... Great Story, Update Soon! |
 ShannonxMoore'sxLoverx 2009-10-20 . chapter 3Great story update soon |
 dodjet 2009-10-20 . chapter 3Loved the interaction between Chris, Stephanie, Christian and Adam. I can just picture all of that happening. I feel so sorry for Christian though and all the doubts he's having about his dreams. He misses Trish and Sophie which I'm sure is the biggest reason for his doubts. Hopefully the more he's around Chris and Stephanie, the more he'll start to see there's a good life out there for him and Trish and Sophie. Great update ! |
 TJ Sparkles 2009-09-16 . chapter 2I love this! I like how you're kind of changing the whole back story and their ages and all that. I wasn't expecting to see Chris or Adam in this chapter but there they were and it made me all happy! It's kind of hard for me to pick what I liked about this chapter, but I think if I had to I would say the way you're touching on Jay's feelings and how he wants to get Trish back. And it sounds like she's not completely against it either.
I'm sorry, the way you write Adam is awesome! It's funny because I could hear him saying the things you wrote, especially about Stephanie.
"Oh, a little word of advice, you stick your butt out a little bit when you fall, try to correct that, we don’t lead with our ass.”
LOL that was hilarious!
Great chap! |
 TJ Sparkles 2009-09-16 . chapter 1OK, so I meant to review this before but didn't get a chance. I did add it to my alerts, but I didn't want to see like one of those kind of people, you know, the ones who alert but never review. Anyway.
I enjoy seeing authors branch out and step outside of their comfort zone. I loved the Trish/Christian storyline when it happened, and I felt like it didn't go on long enough. I really like the concept of this because it seems so real, and it's something a lot of people know about or have seen.
It's really sad that Trish can't support Jay in this, especially since they have a child, but I can kind of see where she's coming from. This was a great first chapter and I like your way with words!
Tina |
 Daniella Consuela 2009-09-15 . chapter 2This whole chapter I was sitting there thinking Jay's got to do right by Sofia *and* Trish...and you get to the end and assure us that that's exactly the case now. I'm so proud of Jay and you and so happy with this story. :) Although it's not your usual main charcters it's your secondary couple and you're doing just fine. Wonderful even. Superb job Nina...really superb. :) |
 Glamagirl 2009-09-15 . chapter 2Oh I love this!
Jay character is exactly like I picture him! and in my minds eye I can see him standing in that gym looking like a lost kid ;-P
But then came Chris and I can't say enough how much I like that he crossed paths not only with him, but with Adam and Steph as well!
I realy hope he makes it and that he and Trish cand mend their relationship, there is still love between them and that won't fade away... well, I hope! lol
Adam ogling at Steph was funny, those three together are my favorites! Haha can't wait for more of this!
BTW, nice to see that Chris and Stephanie are a couple here, but I kind of feel bad for Jay because he will have to go through the training alone, and it's going to be a while before he can make it...
Awesome update, gotta love Trishtian! |