great story...as heather would say, "DEEP, MAN! DAMN!"

Is this in Krad's or Satoshi's view? Nice fanfic. _

VERY twitchycreepy. *twitches* Oh wow. That's... twitchy, to say the least. Wow.

Yes...this was a twitchycreepy kinda fic...but it was a cooltwitchycreepy kinda fic _) good job, luv yaz

Yuki Haitani_

Wow! This is really amazing. You have a knack for analogies.

I liek that a lot. You wrote so wonderfully and clearly, what is so hard to write. SOme ppl take forever or too bluntly write that Krad loves Dark and Satoshi hates him, and all this other stuff, but you wrote it so nicely and stuff it;s amazing! I adore this fic, it's really good.

PRETTY! Yes, I liked it very much. heh, heh...Kradders...Anyways, keep up the good work!

A little weird...but nice. I like it.

that was really really sad, and really really good!*sniff*...- nice job!

suppi-chan, you rock! is there anything that you *don't* write well? highly unlikely! i've read almost all your stuff (well, 'cept one), and it's so GOOD. *sniffles* waaaaahhhh... and now you've added another wonderful story to your collection! _ too cool...