Even though it's likely you won't see this, I think you ought to know that in the episode in which the tenth Doctor is about to regenerate, Rassilon sends the drumbeat back to the eight year old Master and mentions that they are the heart of the Time Lords. By the way, I like your story. You have a magnificent style and while it is not the most original idea, you have certain details and twists that allows you to claim this story as your own.

a study in pink! oh, i love sherlock fans...they are always the most smartest ones...

I love a adjectives don't you? _

love doctor who you did great

Oh my god, I'm actually crying because of the end. I mean I cried when I watched the episode but with the addition of Loki's relationship with him it just made me cry more. So good work and can't wait to read the sequel!

I can guess, I knew it on an instant that that line was a direct quote from Pirates of the Caribbean, Good old Captain Jack Sparrow :D Love the story so far, your character is awesome, crazy but awesomely crazy, just the way I like it :D

Ive read this story 4 times and I still love it, it's an awesome one and I cat wait to read the sequel.

OH MY GOSH !I nearly cried !Soooo good :''''-D , Random bit of trivia I read this yesterday but I fortunetly didn't have time to review...Haha, Well Done And Thanks .

Oooo choice ! :-D , Can't wait ! , Love it as always :-D , Well Done And Thanks .

OH MY GOSH ! THAT WAS SOOOO AWESOME ! I LOVE IT !:-D , Hehe...:-D , Well Done And Thanks .

Awwww ! I love it as always :-D , And I'm guess he whispered 'I love you' ? , :-D , Well Done nd Thanks .

HAHA!I KNEW IT !HAHA I LOVED IT A S ALWAYS :-D , Any chance of a one-shot betweek Zera/Loki and Jack? :-D , Well DOne And Thanks .

I bed that 'Daddy is The Master' and she can hear the drums !Just a hunch...Love it as always :-D , Well Done And Thanks .

good story but the "duh. duh. duh. dum" parts in the middle of it really distract.

Amazing chapter. Can't wait till the sequel.