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Reviews for: Betrothal
yehey
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
that was really great! it was such a nice and sweet story... so cute!
Milli Tora
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Are you talking about the scene in the restaurant where Anna and Silva were talking about Yoh forfeiting the match against Faust? (Note that I am aiming the question to the manga, I really don't remember the anime XD) I like this one; whereas your first Shaman King is seemingly more adult-ish, this one is rather cute. In Volume 19-20, it talks about how they first meet, so it is a little different to what your story suggests but yours I find creative. Again, the characters are kept in-character and the story portays them in a situation that is believable for a couple such as them. Yoh and Anna are really made for one another. =D And I did find that the second half was a little weak but I take it as because your not used to writing about them. Tell me if I'm mistaken. Once again, your stories are brilliant and awesome. Is it okay if I tell you I'm falling in love with your writings? XD Can't wait for any new stories about Shaman King, I'd write them all!
elSarah
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
I like it :)
Animewitch17
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Aaww... Poor Yoh... Became an outcats cause he can see ghosties. His classmates are very shallow. o_O

Oh, and you asked which chapter I was talking about right? The one with Amidamaru blushing when he saw his masters kissed? It's in Volume 24 Chapter 210: Starting from the Beginning. It's in page 7 ^_^

Aanndd... if you want to know the chapter of how Yoh and Anna really met, it's in Volume 19: Chapter 163 called "Osorezan Revoir." I tell you, it's really the best arc of SK ever ^_^... But then again, maybe I'm only the one who thinks that cause I'm a die-hard YohAnna fan girl :3
Nightglider-star
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Brilliant work!
YumeTakato
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Probably the only Shaman King fic I've read and will read all year. I enjoyed it.
djyxa
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
aww... this story's so good. :D
Smart Angel
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Really amazing! Though it didn't happen like that in the real story, this version was really sweet! It definetly gives a nice version of the story, really sweet and adorable. ^^ I really like it! You have to continue to write Shaman King fanfics!
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