 yehey 2009-09-13 . chapter 1 that was really great! it was such a nice and sweet story... so cute! |
 Milli Tora 2009-09-12 . chapter 1Are you talking about the scene in the restaurant where Anna and Silva were talking about Yoh forfeiting the match against Faust? (Note that I am aiming the question to the manga, I really don't remember the anime XD) I like this one; whereas your first Shaman King is seemingly more adult-ish, this one is rather cute. In Volume 19-20, it talks about how they first meet, so it is a little different to what your story suggests but yours I find creative. Again, the characters are kept in-character and the story portays them in a situation that is believable for a couple such as them. Yoh and Anna are really made for one another. =D And I did find that the second half was a little weak but I take it as because your not used to writing about them. Tell me if I'm mistaken. Once again, your stories are brilliant and awesome. Is it okay if I tell you I'm falling in love with your writings? XD Can't wait for any new stories about Shaman King, I'd write them all! |
 elSarah 2009-09-12 . chapter 1I like it :) |
 Animewitch17 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Aaww... Poor Yoh... Became an outcats cause he can see ghosties. His classmates are very shallow. o_O
Oh, and you asked which chapter I was talking about right? The one with Amidamaru blushing when he saw his masters kissed? It's in Volume 24 Chapter 210: Starting from the Beginning. It's in page 7 ^_^
Aanndd... if you want to know the chapter of how Yoh and Anna really met, it's in Volume 19: Chapter 163 called "Osorezan Revoir." I tell you, it's really the best arc of SK ever ^_^... But then again, maybe I'm only the one who thinks that cause I'm a die-hard YohAnna fan girl :3 |
 Nightglider-star 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Brilliant work! |
 YumeTakato 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Probably the only Shaman King fic I've read and will read all year. I enjoyed it. |
 djyxa 2009-09-11 . chapter 1aww... this story's so good. :D |
 Smart Angel 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Really amazing! Though it didn't happen like that in the real story, this version was really sweet! It definetly gives a nice version of the story, really sweet and adorable. ^^ I really like it! You have to continue to write Shaman King fanfics! |