|Reviews for Betrothal|
| XxblackwingsxX 5/16/10 . chapter 1
Very well-written! Ah! I think I'm gonna read more of your stories soon. :))
Anyway, I love the way your portray the characters. Though I stopped watching Shaman King a couple of years ago, this brought back memories. I realized how much I missed this pairing. Yoh and Anna's relationship is... built in trust and understanding. It's like, despite their differences, they understand each other in more ways than one. Well, that's what we call true love. :))
Love it! :D
| yehey 9/13/09 . chapter 1
that was really great! it was such a nice and sweet story... so cute!
| Milli Tora 9/12/09 . chapter 1
Are you talking about the scene in the restaurant where Anna and Silva were talking about Yoh forfeiting the match against Faust? (Note that I am aiming the question to the manga, I really don't remember the anime XD) I like this one; whereas your first Shaman King is seemingly more adult-ish, this one is rather cute. In Volume 19-20, it talks about how they first meet, so it is a little different to what your story suggests but yours I find creative. Again, the characters are kept in-character and the story portays them in a situation that is believable for a couple such as them. Yoh and Anna are really made for one another. D And I did find that the second half was a little weak but I take it as because your not used to writing about them. Tell me if I'm mistaken. Once again, your stories are brilliant and awesome. Is it okay if I tell you I'm falling in love with your writings? XD Can't wait for any new stories about Shaman King, I'd write them all!
| elSarah 9/12/09 . chapter 1
I like it :)
| FruitySmell 9/11/09 . chapter 1
Aaww... Poor Yoh... Became an outcats cause he can see ghosties. His classmates are very shallow. o_O
Oh, and you asked which chapter I was talking about right? The one with Amidamaru blushing when he saw his masters kissed? It's in Volume 24 Chapter 210: Starting from the Beginning. It's in page 7 _
Aanndd... if you want to know the chapter of how Yoh and Anna really met, it's in Volume 19: Chapter 163 called "Osorezan Revoir." I tell you, it's really the best arc of SK ever _... But then again, maybe I'm only the one who thinks that cause I'm a die-hard YohAnna fan girl :3
| Nightglider-star 9/11/09 . chapter 1
| YumeTakato 9/11/09 . chapter 1
Probably the only Shaman King fic I've read and will read all year. I enjoyed it.
| djyxa 9/11/09 . chapter 1
aww... this story's so good. :D
| Smart Angel 9/11/09 . chapter 1
Really amazing! Though it didn't happen like that in the real story, this version was really sweet! It definetly gives a nice version of the story, really sweet and adorable. I really like it! You have to continue to write Shaman King fanfics!