That was simply... Amazing. Fantastic job.

Very , very beautiful , and very , very Margo.
Well done!

Lovely! I really enjoyed reading this. I feel that the way you framed Margo gave me a better impression of her, that what she did in the book was more justified. Great work!

It felt interesting reading it from third point of view, but it fit what you were going for, so it worked. I'm impressed on how much emotion you could put into less than 500 words. You didn't FTBA.

I love this, even though I totally don't imagine Margo this way. For me, it's like the perfect anti-canon: possible but not plausible, with just a pinch of angst. Nicely done.

I truly love this book. Author John Green is simply amazing and I truly truly believe you captured Margo in every sense that is her. :)

This a truly insightful piece, you really bring across Margo's self-confliction with her paper self. Something that John Green leaves amis, it is nice to see how Margo would have truly felt.

This is so good! I love the idea for this one shot and i think u captured Margo's personality and thoughts perfectly. It felt like i was reading something from the book. Good job:)

When I read "Paper Towns" by John Green, It felt complete overall, but I still felt like there was something missing. This sort of "completed" the book for me, in a sense. It let me see Margo a little bit differently, again. Very nice!

BEAUTIFUL :D

wow...that gave me chills. very very good insight. i finally feel like i understand why margo left and more importantly why she had to leave. this is really quite good.

PF

Short and sweet, I love it! Thanks so much for writing a FanFic about my favorite book! I'd reccomend any book by John Green to almost everyone I know! Loved the story! Keep Writing!

- Sage

I love this! The way Margo sees herself as the odd one out in the world... It's so sad and makes you feel so sorry for her. It also shows the inevitablity of her leaving - it's like she's given up and finished with her life, and can't be bothered to try and fix herself. Very emotional.

Sophie

Whoa! Great story! Almost as great as mine...(haha.) Actually, yours is a lot better than mine. Great work!

I don't know the fandom at all, but the way you describe Margo's feelings and the way she is ultimately her own worst enemy fits the challenge very well and is a worthy entry.

You haven't specified what the "rain" referred to, but ultimately you didn't really need to - you have shown us a classic case of cause and consequence.

Nice work!