To bad it stopped there was great loved it. Been catching up with old fics

Maria

This is an excellent, well-written and intertaining story. The third person present tense is done perfectly, without a hitch. Not a switch to third person past tense to be found. You did a dead-on job with Darian and Claire's characters. Definitely one of the best stories on this website, by one of the best fic writers I've ever had the pleasure to read. By the end of the 2nd chapter, I found that I'd stopped critiquing and had become thoroughly involved. Bravo sangaa. You have a wonderful style and voice.

-AllyKat D. writer of the Beta Reader's Inbox

Argh...this is very intriguing! :) I hope you finsh "Rush" soon! :) More more more!

You've let me down...an entire chapter for TBC? Well that makes me want to read it more so please please please finish it soon...please?

This is really, really good. Lots of detail, and a really good story. TBC? TBC? You are going to finish this soon, right? RIGHT?

Is Beholder next? (Hopes there is a next because it's really good) Please continue (You just said that) sorry I'm tired but I loved this story and can't wait to see, or ummm read, the next part I'm really looking forward to it (that means you *MUST* make a next part) n.n

This is great. I hope there is more. Keep up the good work.