Ok, I was eventually able to start this fic. Sorry for the delay... Here are my first impression.

Well, I thank you for bringing Prowl back again, thought I knew you would have done it anyway, since, just like for me, he's your favourite Animated character. Still I'm happy to see him again...

I do not like this Fowl. He look like an awful man. He acts even more arrogant than Animated Thundercracker, calls Sari a freak, disrespeacts Starscream's body and uses his own assisant as a cobaye. Four reasons who makes me already hate him...

I almost feel sorry for Fowl. And now Lase and Starscream are in a dominance fight.

When Nina thinks that the Autobots killed her, is that the Starscream part of her?

I wonder how this dysfunctional family will take to meeting Slipstream? We have Lase, Starscream, and Fowl who all helped create Nina, so Nina has three parents. Then, Slipstream, who was created by Starscream, so she only has one parent. I want to see Nina meet Slipstream.

I suppose when Nina and Lase finally meet, it's not going to be a Hallmark moment?

This chapter was very interesting.

Heh it's nice to see Lase getting some action, and talking to Starscream. I hope she can get out of his control eventually, though.

Hehe and I am so happy that Prowl found Nina first. I totally can't wait to see what happens now, though I hope they have a bit of time to talk or interact before the others come along, or before Nina gets trigger-happy again. I think it would just be nice to see those two talk... at least a little bit.

The "I was raped" line was kinda creepy, though it definitely fit into things. That's definitely one thing that the girl could, erm, say to explain why she was in trouble and why she was indecently dressed. O.o

Hmm, I wonder if maybe someone else could come across Lase somehow while Prowl is busy with Nina. Maybe it could be interesting if, say, Bee and Sari ran into somehow or other. Just a thought. Or at least spotted her.

Guess that's all for now. Heh, I almost wanna make a request, but... I dunno if I should or if it would be appropriate for me to ask. XD But if you're curious or interested, ask me on DA, hehe.

I agree with ya. Having a character stay in one emotion will be a turn off. Well to me anyway.

C.D.

Mabey you could get her to trust someone like one of the Autobots or maybe even the dinobots.

good chap keep em comin'

This has been an interesting story so far. I don't blame Nina for being confused and angry. I can name at least three genetic lab experiments who feel the same way as her.

I would hope that you'd be able to continue this story further. Restarting may work, but I'd try to pull through until you have no other alternative. If you're running out of ideas, I think I can provide a few for you.

For instance, there are still a couple of Decepticons lurking around on Earth; Slipstream, Blackarachnia, and Waspinator being more prominent. Slipstream would be interesting since she's a female spawn of Starscream too, sort of. Blackarachnia's a bit of a growing expert on techno-organics. And I'm not sure how Waspinator may relate to Nina, but he'd certainly would be busy trying to ** Bumblebee.

You have a few anti-scientist OCs. I'm seeing Shadowstar in Nina.

Have you found the acronym for Nina, yet? I've found some weird ones that may or may not be helpful. New Identity Not Applicable; Nano-Interchange Number Array.

I like the bickering between Lase and Starscream.

Hehe nice. I hope they'll be able to reason with Nina. Then again, since the poor girl has absolutely nothing to go on except for that one memory of a head wound and being killed by Autobots, she's definitely in for a rough time of adjustment. Who knows, maybe she'll never fully recover, since that's how she started out, so to speak.

Sounds like the Autobots are getting closer and closer to solving the mystery, especially with Prowl's help. I bet it won't be too much longer before they nail it.

Hehe I see Starscream is making good use of Lase. I bet he's gonna use her to regain his life, so to speak. XD

Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't give up on this fic, please.

One word... Wow!

other great chapter chapter. keep up the good work

Okay... I'll try this again, since my first attempt to review didn't work.

I think the chapter is well-written, I noticed a couple typos but not many.

Nina's actions amused me at times, especially when she kept on and on firing relentlessly for over an hour. I kinda wonder what room the Autobots put her in. I had a funny mental image of her being put in Sari's old room or something, even though I doubt that. XD

I'm glad Sumdac knows all about what's going on now. I wonder what he'll do now that he does know.

I feel bad for Lase, similar to how I feel bad for Barricade in your other fic. Even though these are two completely different characters, in two totally different situations. I wonder if Lase will have to deal with some issues when/if she meets Nina, like, accepting whether or not her daughter is "really human" or whether or not she has any responsibility in the matter. She might also have to rethink her views on her children who died too, perhaps, who knows.

I can't help for feel bad for her, though. Unlike Barricade in your other story, she is more of a victim in some ways. Nina (OMG I almost typed "Ninja") is the result of something that is just a hairline fracture away from being rape in some ways, I think... at least from a certain point of view.

I also bet you're gonna bring Starscream back to life at some point XD Maybe somehow... the protoform liquid in him could bring him back to life? I guess it depends on what angle you want to use here. I mean, does Nina have a spark? If she does not, then that throws that idea out the window, because her essence would be human instead of Cybertronian. (I mean, she would have a soul instead of a spark.) But if she does have a spark, maybe you could somehow say that the protoform liquid has spark-making abilities... I dunno, maybe that is a bit far-fetched.

I guess that's all. Looking forward to the next chapter XD

She's evolving quickly. Is she confusing the Autobots for Starscream or Fowl?

Starscream's in her head! LOL! At first I thought the jet was talking to her, but it's the circuits in her head!

Another Great Chapter. Keep up the good work

What can NINA mean? That is the question. Maybe you can use the word nitrobytes. Or something like that.

C.D.