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castorg
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Captian, Congratulations on your millionth. The story was heart warming and somehow right for the moment. Only found one obvious mispell -(Then the last key "feel" into place.), was it suppose to be "fell" ?. Other than that thanks for the story.
Thomas Linquist
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Can't really add much to what has already been said.

It is never easy to distill a moment down to its true meaning. In many media, something always gets lost in the translation. Film and television have been trying it since their inceptions, and don't have it yet. The tendency is to fill an hour with three seconds of new footage and the rest be flashbacks to moments leading up to the point.

Other authors have tried to get into this moment in KP's life. I know of few that have done it as well.

One million down, and probably a lot more to go. There sometimes just isn't enough time to get them all out.
JAKT
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
A million words...

WOW! WOO HOO!

You're the man!

Very well-written and quite original, this little one shot has everything wrapped by a great song - great interchange between Kim and Ron and terrific characterizations of the two. There are also some interesting surprises as Ron and Kim have matured through the years to this point.

Thanks for the read.

ja and kt
Reader101w
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
Great songfic, I read it with the music from "Alive" on and it fit very good.

congrads on passing the 1.0.0 word limit.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w
screaming phoenix
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
I can't think of a better way of celebrating the relationship between Kim and Ron and the remarkable One million words mark. It's been a great ride Captain! Here's to one million more words to delight, entertain, and celebrate the relationship between authors, readers and the Kimminity.
Quathis
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Wow, congrats on the million word mark. That is very impression and shows dedication. As a fan, you are more than welcome for any reviews and comments I've sent - you've deserved all of them.

This one shot had a powerful emotion in it and really hit me. Good perspective from Kim on how having Ron changed her and saved her soul. I hadn't heard it quite like that, saving her heart yes, but not her very soul. Loved it.
loveandwar007
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Just short, sweet and lovely. Exactly what junior prom was for them, a moment of intense realization. Great job, and congrats on one million words! Way to go, Cap'n! Keep it up, I just love all your work :)
Katsumara
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Fantastic work, Captain. A very sweet one-shot for sure. Another thing, is I want to congratulate you for your accomplishment of one hundred and thirty stories and one million words. I bet you'd never think you'd be that far along and had written that much. I just love your work. I also can't wait for your "School Days" update there. You are one of the best K/R writers out there. Keep up the fine work. =)
whitem
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Good story to mark 1 Million words.

Never heard of that goup before. I'll have to check them out...

Now here's to 1 million more! (clinks glasses)

As always, until the next...
Sentinel103
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
You know Cap it's quality not quanity. I loved all your stories (well except one). BUT you are the MAN.

About 20 words and you just did it so well. Today I reached one quarter of what you've accomplished. If it wasn't for my beta it would be total garbage. CB73 saves my tail more than anyone but he can believe.


I love the way you portray Kim's emotions with song.

Congratulations Cap and a right hand salute to you.

Keep it up bud and a great job,

Larry (Sentinel 103)
JCS1966
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Congratulations on the double milestone, Captain. This was a great way to celebrate; another angle to a pivotal moment in Kim and Ron's life together.

Here's to a million more words and 130 more tales!

Best wishes from a fellow Carolinian(South, that is , now an emigrant to Tennessee ;)),

JCS1966
Comet Moon
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Alive with music

Cavity sweet dude.

Look forward to more (School days)

Rock as always wade clone

Ja ne

Jim
King Of Anime
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Congrads on a million words. That's great man, hopefully, I'll reach that huge milestone someday.

I was listening to the song "Alive" while reading it a second time and I fully felt like I was in the crowd, watching Kim and Ron dancing for the first time and falling in love.

I have always loved your stories, you are a true inspiration to me and I hope that you continue to write such beautiful, powerful, and inspiring stories.

I salute you dear Captain.

KingOAnime.
CajunBear73
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Congrats on this double milestone Cap! Very nice little mark made here.

I remember the group "Da Buzz" from an early work of yours and, yep, it fits here too.

From soft emotions within the heroine, she finds the excitement of love that comes with her accepting her best friend into her heart.

Nicely done.

CajunBear73
Mr. Wizard
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
Cute little story. You always seem to find another song to sing.
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