 Debbie5 2009-10-25 . chapter 1Another great story! To see our guys relaxed and getting drunk (now that is funny) was wonderful. I, too, always felt that Pete made sergeant and that Jim became a detective. I, too, also felt that Pete had finally met the girl for him - Judy. Keep up the great writing! |
 Aussielover 2009-09-26 . chapter 1Quite a story and quite a memory to review so many episodes and cases our boys went on. I really enjoyed hearing the story of Mac, Val, and Pete in the bar fight. I also like the shared memories of when they got through the near death experiences together. Keep them coming. |
 a1965chameleon 2009-09-12 . chapter 1Wonderful story! The commaradarie and friendship between the two, as they reminisced, was absolutely terrific. You did a fantastic job of pulling the reader right out onto the back patio with them. With each story and jibe, I felt like I was right there, witnessing the whole in person. I also loved the way you had them be serious one minute and then lightening the mood the next. Keep on writing these wonderful pieces! |
 ssabl 2009-09-12 . chapter 1Great story
this could have more chapters just a catch up now and then.
Thanks |
 charlotte 2009-09-12 . chapter 1 Great story. Loved it |