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Reviews for: Happy Endings And New Beginnings
Debbie5
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
Another great story! To see our guys relaxed and getting drunk (now that is funny) was wonderful. I, too, always felt that Pete made sergeant and that Jim became a detective. I, too, also felt that Pete had finally met the girl for him - Judy. Keep up the great writing!
Aussielover
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
Quite a story and quite a memory to review so many episodes and cases our boys went on. I really enjoyed hearing the story of Mac, Val, and Pete in the bar fight. I also like the shared memories of when they got through the near death experiences together. Keep them coming.
a1965chameleon
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Wonderful story! The commaradarie and friendship between the two, as they reminisced, was absolutely terrific. You did a fantastic job of pulling the reader right out onto the back patio with them. With each story and jibe, I felt like I was right there, witnessing the whole in person. I also loved the way you had them be serious one minute and then lightening the mood the next. Keep on writing these wonderful pieces!
ssabl
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Great story
this could have more chapters just a catch up now and then.

Thanks
charlotte
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Great story. Loved it
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