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Claire
2009-12-10 . chapter 4
Great start
Hopefully, you'll keep it up
StraightedgeShadow
2009-12-03 . chapter 4
Oh man what's Kagura goin do?
nequam-tenshi
2009-10-31 . chapter 4
That's just cold of Seeshomaru!

It's up to the kid's decision anyway...right?
3karen3
2009-10-30 . chapter 4
This is such a good story, I hope you bring in both of there familys that would be funny. Update soon please
mad4life
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
gosh how sesshomaru brutal so? so i expect the next chapter to be very long. ttfn
vicious-fluffy-bunny-llama
2009-10-13 . chapter 4
WHAT! Please!! We needs a longer chapter!!
Skreeboop
2009-10-12 . chapter 4
I am enjoying this story, but a couple of things are bothering me. First of all, Kisekimaru would have his own scent, not a mix of Kagura's and Sess's. Her scent would probably be on him, but not produced by him.

Next, the whole court thing. The person suing would have to have someone (not themselves, but a sheriff, service, or friend/family member not being part of the witnesses) to serve the claim either to the person being sued or a person 18 years or older who lives or works with the defendant. There has to be sufficient time for the person to respond to the claim.

I'm assuming this will be a highly publicized case and what Sess is doing is illegal, which will reflect poorly on his character and sway public opinion against him, if not land him in legal trouble.

Other than that, I am really enjoying the story and hope you update soon.
saphira404
2009-10-11 . chapter 4
Hum so the plot thickens. Poor Kagura, Sesshoumaru is going to go down on her. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
soojinyeh
2009-10-11 . chapter 4
I hate Sesshomaru here.
onlyanime
2009-10-07 . chapter 3
i can tell already, this story is gonna be so good. please, do us all a favor and write more! :)
Arlaen
2009-10-05 . chapter 3
This is so good! I really like it! Poor Kagura...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Doctor Kiba
2009-09-30 . chapter 3
This story is pretty awesome. Not gonna lie. I like how you write and the pacing is really good. Part of me was wary that this would take a few chapters for her to just pop out the baby and then a few more to settle her baby growing up. But the quicker pace is refreshing and I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru does about Kagura having his child. She's "crossed" him, but what exactly is he to do about it?

I can't wait for the next chapter.
kagura sky
2009-09-30 . chapter 3
I love this. Make Kagura kick Sess ass for being a jerk. If Sess bullies her, shows that she bites back real hard and it gonna hurt him
mad4life
2009-09-25 . chapter 3
oh. spicy. plz continue
vicious-fluffy-bunny-llama
2009-09-24 . chapter 3
Yes!! The Awesomeness is overwhelming. I bow down in worship of this story!! Please please please write more!!
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