great job love the story so far i hope you keep at it i'll love to see were you go with it

I enjoyed reading this chapter. I can't wait for more. I wonder who Catenu will choose for a mate? Please update soon!

This story is quite interesting and I would love to see how it unfolds, I hope that you will get another chapter out soon!

Oh i love this update Please?

you know your story is very fun to read but to be honest I would prefer it if you would just surprise me with who you would think would end up with catenu. and another thing that would be fun is if most of the males have a battle royal in trying to win her affections. ps i am not a writer just a happy person that loves to read peoples stories.

I said it once and I'll say it again... This is FANTASTIC! Tiger and Aga... looking for a mate? Geez from what I saw of Aga he didn't even look interested lol!

This is getting a lot more interesting by the minute hee hee!

That was good. I can't wait to see what you come up with in the next chapter. Please update soon.

Okay this is Brilliant! Your story structure is perfect and the story itself has got me hooked!

Great chapter. Very interesting. I can't wait for the next one.
Who is Catenu going to fall for? Please update soon!

looks good so far, i look forward to reading more :)

The only thing I was disapointed about is the shortness of the chapter but other wise I loved the chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Please update soon.

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. It's been a while since I read any fic for Alien/Predators. I was just browsing and saw this. Very good.
I wonder what that crazy female yautja wanted?
Please update soon!

Hey, wonder what Hult'ah needs to speak with her for? Great chapter and story! update soon! Jess

Cool chapter! hope you update soon! Jess

Awesome story; I hope you update soon!