|Reviews for Walkabout|
| pure-class-princess 5/16/13 . chapter 1
Did you mean to put King George as a character, not King Carney?
| Guest 2/25/13 . chapter 1
| suns and stars 9/16/10 . chapter 3
very nicly done
| RooC 9/27/09 . chapter 2
You have lovely and vivid imagery and a real love of this land and these places, painting them for us with a loving hand.
I'm getting that you see these character for who and what they are but also as vehicles for telling a bigger story. Both are good stories and thus far are equally engaging.
Having read the notes on the other story you posted "Mission" I know you've struggled with finding Nullah's voice. I feel that you made a wise choice here to let the poetry of his speaking the language of his grandfather's language come through.