|Reviews for Cardinal Sins|
| Librasmile 11/14/09 . chapter 1
Great story so far. I'm NOT a James/Lily shipper. I think James was, to quote another fan author, "a nasty little sh*t" and Lily couldn't handle Severus' complexity and took the easy way out. (If you want to see my take on things check out my story For the Price of My Familiar). But I love the way you started. I love your emphasis on morality and psychology and emotion. And I love that you seem to be integrating all three into the engine that powers the story. I'd love to see where you go next with this.
| ITS LUCY INNIT 9/13/09 . chapter 2
great story so far, love the twist of there being someone other than lily, update soon x