DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT !

Yay, Daniel's back! Poor Elizabeth, I feel her pain for missing the love of her life. I think anyone who has played Medievil knows what happens to Daniel, I'm already preparing the tissues! This story is fanastic, I love every word of it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Right, Aiden Fortesque is evil and is totally loving the fact that Elizabeth is heartbroken about Daniel. Though he wants to be a knight and be strong, it's wrong that he missed her birthday. I can't wait for the next chapter, it's like a true love-apart story.

Aw, the romance! How passionate, I could see that Elizabeth and Daniel are meant to be here. Can't wait for the next chapter, really loving this story. Keep it up!

Ack, I loved it! It starts, the romance and the despair of her affections for Daniel. No way a oneshot, this must carry on and become a lovely story. Can't wait for more, so lovely already!