Magnificient. Mercedes' transparent denials are adorable, and Ingway's wit is charming.


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Very very very very very VERY cute!

I totally didn't squeal at the over abundant fluff

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Maybe just a bit.

I loved it. I really wish there were more Odin Sphere fan fics...it was such a beautiful game with amazing characters...but I digress!

Loved the story, characterization, presentation. I'd like to see more of your work.