GREAT beginning, Vap! I'm headed to Chapter Two right now. I LOVE your characterizations -- very spot-on! And your choice in food names were great! XD

I did notice some grammatical things, but that's me being nit-picky. ;)

On to Chapter Two!

Poor Morganna; after all of the hard work she put in to her restaurant.

I hope Darkwing Duck catches the one who burned down the Shadow Chateau soon!

Good story, Vappy. I love Negaduck's part. It cracks me up reading about him looking through a PlayDuck magizne! ;)
Keep up the good writing.

Jlamay.

Flippin' sweet! Another vappy fanfic :D

Ordinarily, I would try and write a proper critique, but I don't have anything to suggest, other than keep writing!

I think I know who's responsible for the arson, btw.

*nods sagely*

Dr Horrible, right?

Well well well, the plot. She thickens. Wonderful job on characterization as always! I would like to think that the fridge was also raided but no debris of any of the prepared dishes were found... and the Tupperwares were suspiciously licked clean. HM.

:D

I hope your muse keeps bugging you to finish this one. I can't wait to see the confrontation of the century.

HAHAHAHAH this is chock full of funny moments

the reference to Gosalyn's being thrown out of the scouts is hysterical andso in character HA!

and negaduck is very believable with his aliby ( disturbing and icky but convincing ) LOL

he is in character and so is Dark and everyone else so far.

I feel really bad for Morgana and I am waiting for more my friend

Irual

Halarious. Negaduck is *perfect* in this chapter. "Yowza!?" I was rolling. Him describing how he would have burnt down Morgana's restauraunt? Also perfect. All of the characters are entertainingly in-character, and interact well. The story clips along at a pleasing pace--thanks in no small part to the elegant writing. This story has just the right tone, and you're not forgetting that these characters are fun and cartoons, and live in an absurd world. I also have always liked Morgana to be (or at least appear) a bit shady.

Looking forward to the conclusion for sure,

--Avian Beakman

Excellent scenes with Negaduck.

Whoever is targeting Morgana is doing a great job.

Keep the good writing.

It sure surprised me that Negaduck didn't burn down The Shadow Chateau. MAybe Morgana got someone mad & that 'someone' wants revenge. The arsonist might be from someone that Morgana knows & may be a mage like her & may even have power over fire or have a fire-breathing familiar. (A mage is someone that can use magic for those that don't know what a mage is.) Poor Morgana's luck has gone from bad to worse. Hopefully, Darkwing; with a little help from Quiverwing will figure out who the arsonist is & catch him/her before something else happens to her or someone she knows & cares about. KEEP UP THE GREATD WORK!

hi

I think I like the set up

I AM curious as to what enemy Morgana made as a villainess that would burn down her restaurant. I am figuring she doesn't want Dark involved because it is an enemy she made as a villainess, blackmail maybe?

anyway I am a devoted DW & Morg shipper so I hope they work things out and that DW can stand by his lady, also that Morg learns to trust him ( and he her)

but we shall see.

I too hope you finish this fic I really like the set up. very in character for everyone so far

Irual

Excellent start and keen job with the dialogues and description.

Keep the good writing.

luv it! I have a feeling that ol' negsie isn't the one behind this :p

Neat I can't wait for chapter two. I think I have a felling who did it, but I won't say.

Great first chapter...the dialogue sounds just like the characters. Looking forward to more!

This is a really good story so far. I also thought it was negaduck that started the fire. I AM curious as to why Morgana doesn't want Darkwing/Drake to get involved in the case. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!