Yazoo didn’t know why she was thanking God when he had walked back on his own.

I laughed so hard when I read that for some reason. xD It just seems so funny.

This chapter is SAD. And crazy! Did they mess with Caroline's head or something? I wanna know! lol

Ah... I loved the chilling atmosphere at the end. Fabulous chapter, my dear. :)

Wow. Chilling story about Haven and Gavin... I liked it though, and it made me even more curious as to how this happened to Yazoo.
And Kadaj was introduced! Yay! Good chapter. :)

awesome chapter!
i really like how you are doing your Kadaj. His attitude seems just perfect.
Also, Carolina and Stanley are a cute couple XD
Carolina being the bubbly old fat woman and Stanley being the tremorring old man, intensely focused on the tiniest distractions. And still they enjoy each other :)
I look forward to seeing more SHM interactions next chap. you do them well.

As much as I'm going to miss all of your wonderful Death Note fics, I'm excited what you'll do for the FF7 fandom!
...As for the last sentence, I kinda want to frame it and put it up on my wall.

You know, it occures to me that I don't have a CLUE how Gil actually works? xD Thank God, you're using real stuff or I'd be lost.

I really like the sound of Charm Ridge, even if you made it up. The title just sounds neat. Like a place that WOULD be right next to a Palace. So congrats on that. I haven't honestly seen or played FF7 in a very long time so I don't even remember what the dates are. I'm making a mental note to look them up though. And I REALLY wanna watch Advent Children now. heehee.

Okay, so about this I loved the first chapter. I was so scared for Yazoo though, sitting there in the back of the taxi cab, I was like "omg! Keep your filthy hands off him you freak!" and I was so happy that the cab driver backed down, and that Yazoo was so awesome about it all. Go Yazoo! *didn't realize she liked him that much*

And then the part where it says: Stanley was obviously not jumping for anyone any time soon. He seemed that if he even rose from his seat, he would fall to pieces in a dusty heap on the kitchen floor. His head was oddly-shaped, his ears lopsided which skewed his glasses and he peered at Yazoo over the rims with kind blue eyes.

For some reason, I just really loved that line of description. It was awesome.

But I do want to ask, is Loz going to make an apperence? I hope so, 'cause for some reason, I just don't think it would feel right without him...
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, and have fun in school! :D

Hey! It wasn't supposed to end! -pouts- Meanie! Now I can't wait to see what happens. Even though I can't seem to shake the similarity to A Series of Unfotunate Events. Although I'm sure that will change soon. :D I can't wait for more, I'm really happy you found me and so happy that you are writing so much! It all makes me ... well ... happy. :D

I like Charm Ridge. I think it suits your description of the place quite nicely. Interesting story, too. Bit confusing, but I'm sure that'll all be explained. Good start! :D

Great story so far, I'm eager to see what happens next! I don't really follow Final Fantasy (only seen Advent Children), but I think you're going to get me pretty interested in the whole thing xD;

Very nice. It does make me wonder about Yazoo though. What happed that everyone dies around him? Does he kill them, or...

Can't wait to read the next part. :]

Kitsune Alchemist.