| Reviews for Mr Monk and the Christmas Surprise |
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wereallinthistogether 2/18/13 . chapter 10please fin |
HannahbananaJane 1/5/13 . chapter 10I really, really hope you finish this story. It's really good; the writing, the storyline, how you portray the characters, all of it adds up to a really good story. But this amazing story isn't done yet... Hannahbanana Jane |
Kawasakifan 12/1/12 . chapter 10 For one like myself who had written a number of single scenes stories several years ago that were predictated on a hidden love that would eventaully blossomed between these two, it is heartwarming to read this sensitively romantic story and hope that the story eill continue to unfoil. Kawasakifan |
detstark 11/28/12 . chapter 10Ahhh beautiful chapter! |
alex hoodle 11/28/12 . chapter 10my initial reaction is '' awwww ''this ch. was like puppies, so cute :) i just really like this story, Dr. bell's wife was cool (monk may not have liked her) but i did, trudy appearing while natalie's there was unique-that hasn't been done before-nice touch :) and nat needs to get it together! monk most likely has an encyclopedic knowledge of the female body...:) please continue |
titousphinx 11/28/12 . chapter 10Chapter full of sweetness. Always so well written. Really want to read more. |
fanficfan71 11/27/12 . chapter 10A lovely chapter. A nice scene with Trudy. |
eylandria13 11/24/12 . chapter 9this is the best idea for monk I have ever heard! brillant! |
titousphinx 11/12/12 . chapter 9I stumbled across your story and I fell in love. I read all the chapters I could not stop. You write with a lot of talent. I imagine very well the characters as if I was watching the episode on TV. I'm really looking forward to read more. Congratulation. |
alex hoodle 10/29/12 . chapter 9nooo...not a cliffhanger! that was so intense, so palpable and so sweet, i'm betting she said those 3 words but how in the heck did she get drugged? wh-? was it from the blow? i gotta know, gotta have more! please?! D |
fanficfan71 10/29/12 . chapter 9Fantastic chapter, I'm glad Natalie got out of there unharmed. Looking forward to your next update. |
Guest 10/25/12 . chapter 8 i know what's so captivating about your writing, and this story, why i can't get enough, you've added a sure fire element to monk, tension, both suspenseful and, as we clearly see sensual, the little touches of humor in it are perfect, exactly how monk\natalie would interact, monk's gonna be super-pissed, i feel for dougal's face and his arousal was funny to me, why? i'm warped like that...aww he called her sweetheart, and he's trying to get laid! XD...i-i just need more man |
alex hoodle 10/25/12 . chapter 8i love the role reversal here, monk wants her, he's persisting while she's unsure, it's refreshing & new and very interesting, i mean, he's trying to get laid lol! that's new. i hope for a great fight scene when monk finds her-i like the flirting, the sweetheart thing-I'm a sap for that sorta stuff,i just-i want more man, you're good :) |
fanficfan71 10/25/12 . chapter 8She should have stayed at Monk's house. Uh oh, I hope she's OK. Looking forward to your next update. |
alex hoodle 10/24/12 . chapter 7woo, monk's got the moves like jagger now huh?, i loved it hahaha, when the phone rang, i said damn it! in frustration like monk lol, i really like how you write monk, it's so different, he's being a guy. but it's still monk, maybe it was the wine lol! you do an amazing job with the procedural stuff as well, keep it up! |