|Reviews for Stairs to Heaven|
| T-Bird 11/22/11 . chapter 4
Not bad You fixed some of the minor errors but theres still problems with the plot itself.
| RMcD94 1/8/10 . chapter 7
THAT WAS AWESOME!
No criticisms at all. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire series. You should write a book.
Nothing more to say, truly awesome.
| T-Bird 1/8/10 . chapter 6
You write some really messed up stuff bro. He raped her for what? 600 years?
| T-Bird 1/8/10 . chapter 5
12 Guardians should be left then right? How would you place those on the Earth on it's continental system in order to maximize the defense? Or are the oceans covered as well and the Earth is more like a death star?
| T-Bird 1/8/10 . chapter 4
The Oort Cloud extends halfway to Alpha Centauri...you make it seem that the boundary of the Solar System and the boundary of the Oort Cloud are really close.
| T-Bird 1/8/10 . chapter 3
You just couldn't keep the Dragonites out of this could you?
| T-Bird 1/8/10 . chapter 2
This seems to be almost a replication process of earlier stories. Do a explanation of the robot and it might be more interesting.
| T-Bird 1/8/10 . chapter 1
So they finally began the nuking process did they? About time...why am I reading this for you again?
| RMcD94 1/1/10 . chapter 5
What time does your sun get up?
Anyway, my review: